for Dusk2/28/2009 c1 tayhla
oh wow, this has me hooked already, please continue with it!
nothing much to comment on just yet, so please update
thankyou
T
oh wow, this has me hooked already, please continue with it!
nothing much to comment on just yet, so please update
thankyou
T
11/6/2008 c1 Niku13
Please can you add the next chaper. Thank you. Very good by the way.
Please can you add the next chaper. Thank you. Very good by the way.
7/8/2008 c1 
2Allys Angelline
Hey! I see you stared this a while ago and never got to updating! Well, I liked it a lot and hope you do get around to it. It's going on my alerts in case you do. I really likes the second paragraph, i could see it in my mind.
Anyway, I hope I get to read more! Oh and this is Glaze, I changed my pen name.
2Allys AngellineHey! I see you stared this a while ago and never got to updating! Well, I liked it a lot and hope you do get around to it. It's going on my alerts in case you do. I really likes the second paragraph, i could see it in my mind.
Anyway, I hope I get to read more! Oh and this is Glaze, I changed my pen name.
2/25/2007 c1 1HonestlyDishonest
It's totally ironic that you would write a twilight fic just a few months after my friends and I all became obsessed with it-especially since I loved all your Harry Potter fics when I was obsessed with those (it's weird how these things come in phases for me. but I think we all have a little bit of that in ourselves). I got the email today about this story, and I literally said "hm?", raised eyebrow and all, since I didn't remember subscribing to any twilight stories, so when I saw it was you I was completely excited! Anyways, I've yet to read a story like this, so I'm excited to see where you go with it. This intro has gotten me all excited for the first chapter! Good job!
1HonestlyDishonestIt's totally ironic that you would write a twilight fic just a few months after my friends and I all became obsessed with it-especially since I loved all your Harry Potter fics when I was obsessed with those (it's weird how these things come in phases for me. but I think we all have a little bit of that in ourselves). I got the email today about this story, and I literally said "hm?", raised eyebrow and all, since I didn't remember subscribing to any twilight stories, so when I saw it was you I was completely excited! Anyways, I've yet to read a story like this, so I'm excited to see where you go with it. This intro has gotten me all excited for the first chapter! Good job!
2/25/2007 c1 Melody
Oh... I really, really want to read Chapter 1! Put it up very soon! I will personally annoy and pester you until you do. I don't know what constructive criticism I can offer you yet; it wasn't very long. But most prologues aren't, so that's fine. WRITE!
Oh... I really, really want to read Chapter 1! Put it up very soon! I will personally annoy and pester you until you do. I don't know what constructive criticism I can offer you yet; it wasn't very long. But most prologues aren't, so that's fine. WRITE!