for I See You2/25/2007 c1 
11Rayc Petite
Hahaha, 'Eyes That Burn Like Cigarettes'... That's a cake lyric. I like this story. I'm not quite sure why you put three chapters into one, but I'm not going to complain. I'm interested. You're in France? That's so cool, I love France. I don't think you really need a beta, I understand everything you are saying and I didn't really catch any major spelling errors. Anyway, continue soon!
11Rayc PetiteHahaha, 'Eyes That Burn Like Cigarettes'... That's a cake lyric. I like this story. I'm not quite sure why you put three chapters into one, but I'm not going to complain. I'm interested. You're in France? That's so cool, I love France. I don't think you really need a beta, I understand everything you are saying and I didn't really catch any major spelling errors. Anyway, continue soon!
2/25/2007 c1 1wildfirelover06
You are an excellent writter and this chapter was really good...keep up the great work
1wildfirelover06You are an excellent writter and this chapter was really good...keep up the great work
2/25/2007 c1 1StopDropNRoll
France! Thats so exciting!
This chapter was great dont worry I can't wait for more
1StopDropNRollFrance! Thats so exciting!
This chapter was great dont worry I can't wait for more
2/25/2007 c1 2Science vs Romance
I really liked this. Please update again soon!
Ps...What part of France? I spent some time in the south, I hope you enjoy your time there as much as I did!
2Science vs RomanceI really liked this. Please update again soon!
Ps...What part of France? I spent some time in the south, I hope you enjoy your time there as much as I did!
2/25/2007 c1 19QueenOfTheSloths
This is really good. You're an excellent writter. Ihave one piece of constructive critasism and that is that I think sometimes you have the characters speak too formally. Other than that, it's great and I'm looking forward to more. :)
19QueenOfTheSlothsThis is really good. You're an excellent writter. Ihave one piece of constructive critasism and that is that I think sometimes you have the characters speak too formally. Other than that, it's great and I'm looking forward to more. :)
2/25/2007 c1 1MiMiBeLLa10
I like how you started this story. The characters are really believable compared to other stories. I can't wait to see how it plays out. Update Soon ! :)
1MiMiBeLLa10I like how you started this story. The characters are really believable compared to other stories. I can't wait to see how it plays out. Update Soon ! :)