3/17/2010 c1 21SchemingAlchemist
I really liked the description used it this story. It would be nice if it was continued, though...I wonder how it would turn out.
I really liked the description used it this story. It would be nice if it was continued, though...I wonder how it would turn out.
4/25/2007 c1 GUESS WHOOOOOOOO
gah it took me long enough to read this * is smacked*
ahahah aw this was so sweet ahahah like demonunitldeath said it would make an awsome prolog (shut up i cant spell =P) and be kewl if u contune it (agh why cant i spell *tear*)
but then i again i dont noe how that would work =S
anywayz i actully read this yesterday and the damn bell rung so i couldn't review intell now ahaah sorry about that
byes*waves*
gah it took me long enough to read this * is smacked*
ahahah aw this was so sweet ahahah like demonunitldeath said it would make an awsome prolog (shut up i cant spell =P) and be kewl if u contune it (agh why cant i spell *tear*)
but then i again i dont noe how that would work =S
anywayz i actully read this yesterday and the damn bell rung so i couldn't review intell now ahaah sorry about that
byes*waves*
3/12/2007 c1 21DemonUntilDeath
I liked that, but you should think of continuing it! It would make a cool prologue. Of course, that's just fangirl desires. I enjoyed it very much!
I liked that, but you should think of continuing it! It would make a cool prologue. Of course, that's just fangirl desires. I enjoyed it very much!
2/26/2007 c1 1blackspica
Nice drabble, I feel so sorry for Fai though...
Well anyway, great job and keep writing^-^
Nice drabble, I feel so sorry for Fai though...
Well anyway, great job and keep writing^-^
2/26/2007 c1 3colouredwing
Well this really is short but interesting, as well.
"he can never frown"
how true :-)
I can hardly imagine Kurogane sleeping peacfully :D
To me that's sounds like the exposition of a story.
Well anyway I hope to read more like this from you in the future ;-)
Well this really is short but interesting, as well.
"he can never frown"
how true :-)
I can hardly imagine Kurogane sleeping peacfully :D
To me that's sounds like the exposition of a story.
Well anyway I hope to read more like this from you in the future ;-)