for Reptile Of The Leaf1/27/2009 c1 
6Polish
Besides the bold type face making it just a little hard to read, this is very good, you have my attention. Could you please update?
6PolishBesides the bold type face making it just a little hard to read, this is very good, you have my attention. Could you please update?
4/15/2007 c1 beotch
hahahahaha... i got to stop laughing!
hahahahaha... i got to stop laughing!
3/4/2007 c1 54Frozen-Void
cool did Kakashi-kun get married plz update i want to read its good so far ^o^
54Frozen-Voidcool did Kakashi-kun get married plz update i want to read its good so far ^o^
3/1/2007 c1 Sesshou's ward
Its really good! Hah, bet you didn't expect me to review this! I like it alot, please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next and their reactions! ^_^
4ever Sesshou's ward!
Its really good! Hah, bet you didn't expect me to review this! I like it alot, please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next and their reactions! ^_^
4ever Sesshou's ward!
2/27/2007 c1 universemasterverizon.net
So it's Kakashi's kid...you do know that Kakashi wasn't born with the sharigan in his left eye. He was injured and his left eye was cut out in a battle and his old teammate Obito, as he was dying asked Rin (another teammate and medic kunoichi) to place his left eye into Kakashi. So...in other words Kakashi's child wouldn't have the sharigan for genetic reasons. But other then that it's a really good chapter. Update soon!
So it's Kakashi's kid...you do know that Kakashi wasn't born with the sharigan in his left eye. He was injured and his left eye was cut out in a battle and his old teammate Obito, as he was dying asked Rin (another teammate and medic kunoichi) to place his left eye into Kakashi. So...in other words Kakashi's child wouldn't have the sharigan for genetic reasons. But other then that it's a really good chapter. Update soon!
2/26/2007 c1 purple puma
It was really good add another chapter!
It was really good add another chapter!
2/26/2007 c1 5Gothic Tigress
um... i dunno what to make of it... there's many different ideas of what's up with these kids but i dunno... you deff have me curious
5Gothic Tigressum... i dunno what to make of it... there's many different ideas of what's up with these kids but i dunno... you deff have me curious
2/26/2007 c1 Keiko-Shinai
Well... I must say, this story has enormous potential.. but... *dun dun DUN* I saw quite a few spelling errors as well as gramatical errors. Naruto isn't THAT spazzy anymore... and Konohamaru is now the age Naruto was when he became a genin. If you saw the Shippuden episode he was even undertakeing the same mission with the cat... and the cliff hangars actually a good thing... it makes your readers wait DESPERATELY for the next chapter... I myself just joined but already have an excellent fanfiction idea... feel free to pm me (however you do that I don't know... but you can e-mail me I guess...
Well... I must say, this story has enormous potential.. but... *dun dun DUN* I saw quite a few spelling errors as well as gramatical errors. Naruto isn't THAT spazzy anymore... and Konohamaru is now the age Naruto was when he became a genin. If you saw the Shippuden episode he was even undertakeing the same mission with the cat... and the cliff hangars actually a good thing... it makes your readers wait DESPERATELY for the next chapter... I myself just joined but already have an excellent fanfiction idea... feel free to pm me (however you do that I don't know... but you can e-mail me I guess...
2/26/2007 c1 Chelsey
yay! a good Naruto story thing ^^ but you need to add more chapters! no cliff hangers!
yay! a good Naruto story thing ^^ but you need to add more chapters! no cliff hangers!