
7/3/2012 c1
2brokenpassions
Holy crap I just saw this and man that was a long time ago! LOL good times.

Holy crap I just saw this and man that was a long time ago! LOL good times.
3/6/2007 c1
89Mizuni-no-neko
it was ok, kinda short even for a oneshot. cute though. If you write chapter fics or if you ever start DO NOT GO TO FAST! you want to kinda drag it out. not angsty longing, just don't move the relationship too fast and try to draw out the confession that's the best and usually cutest part.

it was ok, kinda short even for a oneshot. cute though. If you write chapter fics or if you ever start DO NOT GO TO FAST! you want to kinda drag it out. not angsty longing, just don't move the relationship too fast and try to draw out the confession that's the best and usually cutest part.
3/2/2007 c1 not-sure-what27
short and sweet - if only it could be that simple! you should let kishimoto know about the idea
short and sweet - if only it could be that simple! you should let kishimoto know about the idea