for Yet another Darren Shan love story11/28/2009 c1 Mystery
Not to be rude or anything, but your grammar sucks. It was kinda hard to read the story when I see you spell 'Crepsley' 'Crepsly' and 'Chrapsly' Maybe if you change the spelling...? The story line is good and stuff but some people won't realize that if you spell like a fourth grader. If you change it, it will be an awesome story
Not to be rude or anything, but your grammar sucks. It was kinda hard to read the story when I see you spell 'Crepsley' 'Crepsly' and 'Chrapsly' Maybe if you change the spelling...? The story line is good and stuff but some people won't realize that if you spell like a fourth grader. If you change it, it will be an awesome story
7/20/2009 c1 Jayne
I loved the story line, but you really need to get better at spelling.
I loved the story line, but you really need to get better at spelling.
10/15/2008 c1 vampires-pen
it's not brilliant. i'd be lying if i said it was awful, but i can't say i like it.
and it's CREPSLEY not CHREPSLY.
it's not brilliant. i'd be lying if i said it was awful, but i can't say i like it.
and it's CREPSLEY not CHREPSLY.
4/30/2008 c1 Marissa
Omg! That was a beautiful story! It's weird... I have brown hair and blue eyes! And I'm shy!
Omg! That was a beautiful story! It's weird... I have brown hair and blue eyes! And I'm shy!
8/3/2007 c1 ZG
I find this very interesting and think you should continue the story.If its going to take awhile to write the next chapters make them longer PLEASE11!1.
I find this very interesting and think you should continue the story.If its going to take awhile to write the next chapters make them longer PLEASE11!1.
5/5/2007 c1 Ashley
I LOVED IT please write a sequel i would love it if u did
I LOVED IT please write a sequel i would love it if u did
4/13/2007 c1 annonymous
you suck at spelling! and grammar, for that matter, too.
you suck at spelling! and grammar, for that matter, too.
3/28/2007 c1 Redemption
Hey this is the evil flamer Gomenasai (which means 'sorry' in Japanese), I felt like a change in name was in order. I just wanted to say sorry for the mean review. I also have an offer for you. If you want, I'll be a beta for your stories. I noticed you spelling is much better in this story than the last one, but the grammar still has a few problems. I'm not the best at spelling/grammar, but I think I can help. If you're interested, my Email is
Now onto this story. Nice theme and another enjoyable Darren x OC. I hope to read more, and I'm waiting for the sequal to the other story to come out. Until then, cya.
Hey this is the evil flamer Gomenasai (which means 'sorry' in Japanese), I felt like a change in name was in order. I just wanted to say sorry for the mean review. I also have an offer for you. If you want, I'll be a beta for your stories. I noticed you spelling is much better in this story than the last one, but the grammar still has a few problems. I'm not the best at spelling/grammar, but I think I can help. If you're interested, my Email is
Now onto this story. Nice theme and another enjoyable Darren x OC. I hope to read more, and I'm waiting for the sequal to the other story to come out. Until then, cya.