for Gonna Sing You My Love Song8/11/2007 c3 smartieepants
I feel pathetic because I find myself googling each song so that I know what they sound like. I guess I'm not a closet abba fan. =[ I like that Dean is pushing her away because it means that you've written him in character.
I can't wait for the next one. =D
I feel pathetic because I find myself googling each song so that I know what they sound like. I guess I'm not a closet abba fan. =[ I like that Dean is pushing her away because it means that you've written him in character.
I can't wait for the next one. =D
7/7/2007 c3 
3dani.the.ODH
"i'm breaking and he's broken and it's wrong"
amazing.
i love you.
marry me.
:D)
3dani.the.ODH"i'm breaking and he's broken and it's wrong"
amazing.
i love you.
marry me.
:D)
4/6/2007 c2 Lilmisshardygirl
"eye spy something else thats hard Dean"
*spews water on computer moniter*
Holy crap. Good line. So very Lauren 2.
"eye spy something else thats hard Dean"
*spews water on computer moniter*
Holy crap. Good line. So very Lauren 2.
3/25/2007 c1 9Licensetocreep
Oh man, this just seriously made my night!
I love the random Elvis Presley fandom bar. I actually got stuck eating at one of those once, and that actually occurs!
well, not the Dean and Sam there(I wish) but the people there singing into salt shakers.
LOVE THIS FICLET!
9LicensetocreepOh man, this just seriously made my night!
I love the random Elvis Presley fandom bar. I actually got stuck eating at one of those once, and that actually occurs!
well, not the Dean and Sam there(I wish) but the people there singing into salt shakers.
LOVE THIS FICLET!
3/22/2007 c3 Delsunhine86
Hey i love this. MORE MORE MORE i like this story it's so fun and even when you ansgty i stil get the vibe between the two that started in BIT. you should so do more, but then again you can't belive anything i say, i only want more lauren and dean
love del
Hey i love this. MORE MORE MORE i like this story it's so fun and even when you ansgty i stil get the vibe between the two that started in BIT. you should so do more, but then again you can't belive anything i say, i only want more lauren and dean
love del
3/17/2007 c3 1summerbreeze247
I thought that this was just going to be a short-one-piece fic, but you managed to turn it into something else, something that could turn into a lot more if you wanted it to. I like the use of songs in the fic, and I like the way that it's taken an angsty turn and how shes jealous of Jo...I can't wait for Jo to meet Lauren in your other fic (is that ever going to happen). And we know that Dean's broken and she so desperately wants to fix him but doesn't know how :( I definetely think you should keep going with htis and see where it leads you because I love it so far!
1summerbreeze247I thought that this was just going to be a short-one-piece fic, but you managed to turn it into something else, something that could turn into a lot more if you wanted it to. I like the use of songs in the fic, and I like the way that it's taken an angsty turn and how shes jealous of Jo...I can't wait for Jo to meet Lauren in your other fic (is that ever going to happen). And we know that Dean's broken and she so desperately wants to fix him but doesn't know how :( I definetely think you should keep going with htis and see where it leads you because I love it so far!
3/17/2007 c3 Maiej
Oh my goodness, I saw you had updated both this and BIT! I had a mini panic attack, "WHICH ONE DO I READ FIRST!"
I chose this one expecting more humour and AHH! ANGST! [sobs]
But oh well! You do it so well, I can forgive you!
"I was pretty sure I radiated ‘’ – but she wasn’t picking up on the vibes so great."
Haha, this reminds me of myself around this guy I work with. But he's too nice to everyone so all the girls go for him. [sigh] It's my own personal angst-battle :P
AHH! I can't wait for the next one! Awesome-tastic job! I'm off to read BIT now (SQUEELS in happiness!).
-Jenni-Maie
Oh my goodness, I saw you had updated both this and BIT! I had a mini panic attack, "WHICH ONE DO I READ FIRST!"
I chose this one expecting more humour and AHH! ANGST! [sobs]
But oh well! You do it so well, I can forgive you!
"I was pretty sure I radiated ‘’ – but she wasn’t picking up on the vibes so great."
Haha, this reminds me of myself around this guy I work with. But he's too nice to everyone so all the girls go for him. [sigh] It's my own personal angst-battle :P
AHH! I can't wait for the next one! Awesome-tastic job! I'm off to read BIT now (SQUEELS in happiness!).
-Jenni-Maie
3/17/2007 c3 Diva0789
this is a goodone. i like that you dealt with the whole John dying thing. im glad to see that. WOOT WOOT! i cant wait for the next one!
this is a goodone. i like that you dealt with the whole John dying thing. im glad to see that. WOOT WOOT! i cant wait for the next one!
3/12/2007 c2 Maiej
Me again! Yay!
And here I was thinking this couldn't get any better! Awesome job, as usual.
What a nifty gift for moi :P I'm in my spare block at school right now feeling uber crappy and this just perked me right up! Dean seems to do that for me ^_^
“Love isn’t easy, but it sure is hard enough… eye-spy something else that’s hard, Dean.”
Love that line so much! But not as much as:
"She smiled at him, fluttered her eyelashes, and I watched her swish away, calculated the velocity, angle and force it would take to get a fork through her kidney at fifty paces."
Haha, I feel like that sometimes. But I never thought of going for the kidneys _ Usually the eyes.
YES YES! Do a third! You shall never dissapoint me at this pace your going! Wow, it's like every day you're posting something new now! It makes me all "Sque!" inside! Keep it up! You're doing a fantabulistic job! Until next time (which will probably be super soon!)
-Jenni-Maie
Me again! Yay!
And here I was thinking this couldn't get any better! Awesome job, as usual.
What a nifty gift for moi :P I'm in my spare block at school right now feeling uber crappy and this just perked me right up! Dean seems to do that for me ^_^
“Love isn’t easy, but it sure is hard enough… eye-spy something else that’s hard, Dean.”
Love that line so much! But not as much as:
"She smiled at him, fluttered her eyelashes, and I watched her swish away, calculated the velocity, angle and force it would take to get a fork through her kidney at fifty paces."
Haha, I feel like that sometimes. But I never thought of going for the kidneys _ Usually the eyes.
YES YES! Do a third! You shall never dissapoint me at this pace your going! Wow, it's like every day you're posting something new now! It makes me all "Sque!" inside! Keep it up! You're doing a fantabulistic job! Until next time (which will probably be super soon!)
-Jenni-Maie
3/12/2007 c2 Gatta
These little oneshots of yours really make my day. Even though you update every Sunday you still manage to post even more Lauren and Dean greatness. Seriously, I wish they were a canon couple. I can just totally see them together, fighting over the music and then making up and everything else. All the while completely denying the fact that they're in love with each other, of course.
These little oneshots of yours really make my day. Even though you update every Sunday you still manage to post even more Lauren and Dean greatness. Seriously, I wish they were a canon couple. I can just totally see them together, fighting over the music and then making up and everything else. All the while completely denying the fact that they're in love with each other, of course.
3/11/2007 c1 Maiej
Haha, I was actually told to "Wait 30 seconds" before I could post another review. That was kinda weird.
I am still "SQUE"ing over this one-shot. It's too adorable! I usually hate song-fics (probably because people choose really crappy songs) but I absolutely LOVE yours!
"Oh, fuck him.
It’s on."
I'm sorry, this made me grin from ear to ear because it sounds like something I would say, haha!
And I always mess with the radio and CD player in my brother's car (before he trashed said-car, smart stuff.), so this just brought back fond memories, haha!
I love Lauren. I LOVE Dean (DUH!). And I LOVE Lauren and Dean TOGETHER! God, I wish they were canon, I swear!
Hehe, and just a little side-note. This story is now under my "Notes" on my iPod :P I was reading this on my bus on the way to school, haha. While listening to ABBA, of course.
Fabulous work, yet again! Keep it up and I can't wait for more!
Haha, I was actually told to "Wait 30 seconds" before I could post another review. That was kinda weird.
I am still "SQUE"ing over this one-shot. It's too adorable! I usually hate song-fics (probably because people choose really crappy songs) but I absolutely LOVE yours!
"Oh, fuck him.
It’s on."
I'm sorry, this made me grin from ear to ear because it sounds like something I would say, haha!
And I always mess with the radio and CD player in my brother's car (before he trashed said-car, smart stuff.), so this just brought back fond memories, haha!
I love Lauren. I LOVE Dean (DUH!). And I LOVE Lauren and Dean TOGETHER! God, I wish they were canon, I swear!
Hehe, and just a little side-note. This story is now under my "Notes" on my iPod :P I was reading this on my bus on the way to school, haha. While listening to ABBA, of course.
Fabulous work, yet again! Keep it up and I can't wait for more!
3/8/2007 c1 summerbreeze247
I absolutely love it when you post these little one-shots in between chapters it totally makes the wait easier. This piece had everything, it had the humor, the romance, and though not alot of it you had a brief second of angst which was then turned humorous. I love that your able to do that. That you can take all these different types of genres and play them out beautifully in a one-shot. Though I have to admit any OC that you write through a first person point of view is going to be Lauren for me lol.
And can I just say that I absolutely lovee the title of this story? Just glimpsing the title and I knew I had to read it. And the use of ABBA was a perfect choice. Though it did bring up some unpleasant memories of red clown wigs and white platform shoes. And Dean is so on par in each of your stories, especially in this one in how he reacts to the changing music. And that comment, how the songs might mean something? I could just imagine the look on his face and *sigh* I just melt. Bet you didn't think I could write a long review for a one-shot :) Can't wait for more short pieces, and the update on Sunday!
I absolutely love it when you post these little one-shots in between chapters it totally makes the wait easier. This piece had everything, it had the humor, the romance, and though not alot of it you had a brief second of angst which was then turned humorous. I love that your able to do that. That you can take all these different types of genres and play them out beautifully in a one-shot. Though I have to admit any OC that you write through a first person point of view is going to be Lauren for me lol.
And can I just say that I absolutely lovee the title of this story? Just glimpsing the title and I knew I had to read it. And the use of ABBA was a perfect choice. Though it did bring up some unpleasant memories of red clown wigs and white platform shoes. And Dean is so on par in each of your stories, especially in this one in how he reacts to the changing music. And that comment, how the songs might mean something? I could just imagine the look on his face and *sigh* I just melt. Bet you didn't think I could write a long review for a one-shot :) Can't wait for more short pieces, and the update on Sunday!
3/8/2007 c1 Diva0789
that is so freakin funny! i love it! you should make this a two parter. like show it months later adn they still do it to eachother to et each other hot...not that they need help in that depratment..but you know what i mean...lol. GREAT STORY!
that is so freakin funny! i love it! you should make this a two parter. like show it months later adn they still do it to eachother to et each other hot...not that they need help in that depratment..but you know what i mean...lol. GREAT STORY!