for A Serpent's Sacrifice9/5/2012 c1 lordmortiso
im confused as shit. whats with the sweater?
im confused as shit. whats with the sweater?
8/28/2012 c45 msreaderx
I truely enjoyed your story and I will like to say, you did an amazing job. Will take a peek at your new and other stories.
I truely enjoyed your story and I will like to say, you did an amazing job. Will take a peek at your new and other stories.
8/20/2012 c45 
3WhiteElfElder
This has been a great ride that was more realistic that most because even with his power he still has human frailty.
3WhiteElfElderThis has been a great ride that was more realistic that most because even with his power he still has human frailty.
8/17/2012 c24 WhiteElfElder
Did the horcrux leave Harry into the body of another, did it go through the link back to Voldemort, or did it intergrate with whatever part of Voldemort is in Harry?
Did the horcrux leave Harry into the body of another, did it go through the link back to Voldemort, or did it intergrate with whatever part of Voldemort is in Harry?
8/17/2012 c14 WhiteElfElder
More to the plot of DumbDumb not being dead if his personal wards have not dropped. Either that, or he anchored them to something or someone else instead of himself.
More to the plot of DumbDumb not being dead if his personal wards have not dropped. Either that, or he anchored them to something or someone else instead of himself.
8/17/2012 c12 WhiteElfElder
I hope that Snape gets everything he is deserving of. Although, I am wondering if DumbDumb is actually dead or is playing dead since Snape's vow did not kill him when he blasted DumbDumb off the tower.
I hope that Snape gets everything he is deserving of. Although, I am wondering if DumbDumb is actually dead or is playing dead since Snape's vow did not kill him when he blasted DumbDumb off the tower.
8/13/2012 c3 WhiteElfElder
Looks like Harry and Dumbledore both missed the item that Voldemort had, a knecklace of some sort.
Looks like Harry and Dumbledore both missed the item that Voldemort had, a knecklace of some sort.
6/21/2012 c12 DarkPirateKing69
well this changes things quite a bit..now it becomes almost impossible to predict what happens next..so good work on that
well this changes things quite a bit..now it becomes almost impossible to predict what happens next..so good work on that
6/21/2012 c3 DarkPirateKing69
when i see word' independent' in a hp story summary,i except to see him learn more magic,become more mature,cool headed i saw the pairing and the fact that this is DH story i became little worried..and after this chapter my worries were you are gonna keep three of them together then you better start making some serious personality changes in hermione and ..i hope you know what you are would be shame to stop reading good story bcoz it's too canon.
when i see word' independent' in a hp story summary,i except to see him learn more magic,become more mature,cool headed i saw the pairing and the fact that this is DH story i became little worried..and after this chapter my worries were you are gonna keep three of them together then you better start making some serious personality changes in hermione and ..i hope you know what you are would be shame to stop reading good story bcoz it's too canon.
6/21/2012 c2 DarkPirateKing69
bcoz you went in such great lengths to tell harry he is awesome,i want to see harry doing more than canon-magic and not pussyfooting around with stunners..
bcoz you went in such great lengths to tell harry he is awesome,i want to see harry doing more than canon-magic and not pussyfooting around with stunners..
6/17/2012 c45 sayena
Brilliant story. Well written, great plot, good ending, what more could one want.
Off to read the bottom of the lake
Thank you for all your work
Brilliant story. Well written, great plot, good ending, what more could one want.
Off to read the bottom of the lake
Thank you for all your work
5/16/2012 c45 Shiroi Majo
You know, you had me wondering from the first chapter just who the serpent would be. I was thinking of the different Slytherins you could introduce to the story, and then when Issamir joined Harry, I thought of him. I never expected Hashashis.
It wasn't just the title that kept me guessing, however. You have created an intricate story, full of twists and turns I never expected. I hope you continue writing, you have a real gift.
You know, you had me wondering from the first chapter just who the serpent would be. I was thinking of the different Slytherins you could introduce to the story, and then when Issamir joined Harry, I thought of him. I never expected Hashashis.
It wasn't just the title that kept me guessing, however. You have created an intricate story, full of twists and turns I never expected. I hope you continue writing, you have a real gift.