for A Serpent's Sacrifice1/14/2022 c2 Makimass
pull the other one dumbledore, you barely did anything to prepare harry to fight voldemort..
pull the other one dumbledore, you barely did anything to prepare harry to fight voldemort..
1/14/2022 c1 Makimass
How can harry be a great wizard when he tends to rely on people around him, I've read 1-7 books and he barely trains himself to be a great wizard during his hogwarts years, the only achievements he amde was expectro patronum, learn accio spell during 4th year and when he was teaching DA...he tends to make an effort through quidditch only..
How can harry be a great wizard when he tends to rely on people around him, I've read 1-7 books and he barely trains himself to be a great wizard during his hogwarts years, the only achievements he amde was expectro patronum, learn accio spell during 4th year and when he was teaching DA...he tends to make an effort through quidditch only..
12/20/2021 c45 Guest
I loved this story. I wasn't sure how I felt about it for a while. But by the time I finished I think I like it better than JR'S 7th book. Maybe. I am glad I read this.
I loved this story. I wasn't sure how I felt about it for a while. But by the time I finished I think I like it better than JR'S 7th book. Maybe. I am glad I read this.
11/21/2020 c9 Guest
It would be better to kidnap snape via fawkes and interrogate him at leisure then obliviate him, otherwise they will be letting a DE know that they are after the horcruxes.
It would be better to kidnap snape via fawkes and interrogate him at leisure then obliviate him, otherwise they will be letting a DE know that they are after the horcruxes.
11/21/2020 c6 Guest
I've read so many stories where everyone (weasleys, dumbledore etc) is bashed and trashed that this makes such a pleasant change. I'm even managing to tolerate Ginny whom i have detested since JKR sprung the fangirl on us all and dashed hopes for harry/hermione (though these days i prefer the idea of harry/luna but there are very few stories where they get together). After his horrible childhood, I just cant see harry ever wanting to get together with someone who has a nasty temper and tendency to explode and frankly that is a trait i despise anyway. I don't approve of molly's howlers either. Even molly seems nice here - except I noticed the reference to 'phlegm' which i thought was appalling of molly and ginny in canon.
I've read so many stories where everyone (weasleys, dumbledore etc) is bashed and trashed that this makes such a pleasant change. I'm even managing to tolerate Ginny whom i have detested since JKR sprung the fangirl on us all and dashed hopes for harry/hermione (though these days i prefer the idea of harry/luna but there are very few stories where they get together). After his horrible childhood, I just cant see harry ever wanting to get together with someone who has a nasty temper and tendency to explode and frankly that is a trait i despise anyway. I don't approve of molly's howlers either. Even molly seems nice here - except I noticed the reference to 'phlegm' which i thought was appalling of molly and ginny in canon.
9/24/2020 c45 
1anjiepotter
this is the best harry and horcrux story i ever read, even though sometimes its depressing. but i really enjoyed it...
1anjiepotterthis is the best harry and horcrux story i ever read, even though sometimes its depressing. but i really enjoyed it...
8/25/2020 c45 gamatrixonline
I really enjoyed your story. Also, I must say that the method you used to describe destroying a horcrux was much better than JKRs in my opinion. I think JKRs was too simple. Like it seemed too easy. I can safely say that the time I spent in reading you stories was a time I enjoyed a lot. I also liked the way Harry coped with his situation. Many a times, books and movies just state they started moving though it doesn't seem that would be so easy to do. I really like how you took the time to describe Harry healing and I think you did a very good job of it.
Thank you for writing such a good story.
I really enjoyed your story. Also, I must say that the method you used to describe destroying a horcrux was much better than JKRs in my opinion. I think JKRs was too simple. Like it seemed too easy. I can safely say that the time I spent in reading you stories was a time I enjoyed a lot. I also liked the way Harry coped with his situation. Many a times, books and movies just state they started moving though it doesn't seem that would be so easy to do. I really like how you took the time to describe Harry healing and I think you did a very good job of it.
Thank you for writing such a good story.
8/11/2020 c45 peggy77
I loved this story and am very glad I found it again. You are an amazing writer!
I loved this story and am very glad I found it again. You are an amazing writer!
8/11/2020 c44 peggy77
Aww, that was so sweet! This whole chapter was just so great, made me feel so much better. And I've never read a scene describing a first kiss in such a tender, romantic way - you truly do have a gift for words!
Aww, that was so sweet! This whole chapter was just so great, made me feel so much better. And I've never read a scene describing a first kiss in such a tender, romantic way - you truly do have a gift for words!
8/11/2020 c43 peggy77
Such a severe case of PTSD. Poor Harry. But I do think he will slowly get over it. I don't think they should have gone back to Hogwarts though.
I think they should have found someplace out in the country or up in the mountains or maybe on some sparsely populated island and lived away from everyone for a while.
Such a severe case of PTSD. Poor Harry. But I do think he will slowly get over it. I don't think they should have gone back to Hogwarts though.
I think they should have found someplace out in the country or up in the mountains or maybe on some sparsely populated island and lived away from everyone for a while.
8/10/2020 c42 peggy77
Oh my, tear jerker. Sitting here sobbing. I hope he wants to live and I even hope Ron comes around though I can see why he feels as he does.
Poor, poor Hermione, I don't know if I could take it if I were her and Harry died.
Oh my, tear jerker. Sitting here sobbing. I hope he wants to live and I even hope Ron comes around though I can see why he feels as he does.
Poor, poor Hermione, I don't know if I could take it if I were her and Harry died.
8/10/2020 c41 peggy77
Oh no, not Ginny too! Her family is going to be completely devastated! Harry may be better off though. He would be with his parents, Sirius and Dumbledore.
Oh no, not Ginny too! Her family is going to be completely devastated! Harry may be better off though. He would be with his parents, Sirius and Dumbledore.
8/10/2020 c40 peggy77
He doesn't know how truly lucky he is to have such patient loving friends. I think I might've tried to body bind him and...I don't know, take him to the Love room in the Department of Mysteries or something, lol!
He doesn't know how truly lucky he is to have such patient loving friends. I think I might've tried to body bind him and...I don't know, take him to the Love room in the Department of Mysteries or something, lol!