for Subway Meeting3/21/2010 c1 
2Roberta Sparrow
I just can't believe how angry I got at Rory at the end of this chapter. I sort of felt betrayed by her, which is completely silly since, you know, it's entirely fiction. But poor Jess! I'm reading on for sure.
2Roberta SparrowI just can't believe how angry I got at Rory at the end of this chapter. I sort of felt betrayed by her, which is completely silly since, you know, it's entirely fiction. But poor Jess! I'm reading on for sure.
4/1/2008 c7 9melissaeverlasting
Great job! I enjoyed every bit of it. Was the "Ror" part a typo, though? She said no one calls her that "unless provoked".
And WOW - you wrote a NOVEL? How old are you? Great for you - I'd love to read it!
-Melissa
9melissaeverlastingGreat job! I enjoyed every bit of it. Was the "Ror" part a typo, though? She said no one calls her that "unless provoked".
And WOW - you wrote a NOVEL? How old are you? Great for you - I'd love to read it!
-Melissa
7/2/2007 c1 elle
i love reading an amazing first chapter when there are more to follow. i'm mightily excited (is that even a word?) and will continue reviewing as i go.
i love reading an amazing first chapter when there are more to follow. i'm mightily excited (is that even a word?) and will continue reviewing as i go.
6/18/2007 c7 6Eliza S
I totally loved it :) it's a good storyline and I thought that from how they met (again) and how they took things slowly, was all perfect. it was Jess and Rory, what else can we ask for?
Really, and how she asked him to move in was so perfect. sweet, impulsive, not second guessing herself.
I completely loved it :)
6Eliza SI totally loved it :) it's a good storyline and I thought that from how they met (again) and how they took things slowly, was all perfect. it was Jess and Rory, what else can we ask for?
Really, and how she asked him to move in was so perfect. sweet, impulsive, not second guessing herself.
I completely loved it :)
6/1/2007 c6 6Eliza S
Whoa! that was fast! but I do like how the met and how things turned out. please post that epilogue soon, I really want to know what happens between Rory and Jess :)
6Eliza SWhoa! that was fast! but I do like how the met and how things turned out. please post that epilogue soon, I really want to know what happens between Rory and Jess :)
4/3/2007 c5 10A terrible Beauty
oh i want to know what
Rory says to Logan about all this
and what he could have possibly
been doing that late at night!
post more soon!
-lauren
10A terrible Beautyoh i want to know what
Rory says to Logan about all this
and what he could have possibly
been doing that late at night!
post more soon!
-lauren
4/2/2007 c5 6Eliza S
I know it's like he doesn't want to hurt her, but he is being too harsh on her...I mean she's alone and all that wants it to be with him, can he tell her he feels the same way? I liked the chapter, and I'm really interested in your story (I think I already told you I love the idea of how they met) so please keep writing! I know sometimes reviews are very encouraging so I hope this is one of those.
and update when you can, cause it's better a good chapter than a sucky one with a fast update.
=)
6Eliza SI know it's like he doesn't want to hurt her, but he is being too harsh on her...I mean she's alone and all that wants it to be with him, can he tell her he feels the same way? I liked the chapter, and I'm really interested in your story (I think I already told you I love the idea of how they met) so please keep writing! I know sometimes reviews are very encouraging so I hope this is one of those.
and update when you can, cause it's better a good chapter than a sucky one with a fast update.
=)
4/2/2007 c5 LVRofTristan
Love love love it. I hope Rory can get her act together in the next chapter. Great work, update soon.
Love love love it. I hope Rory can get her act together in the next chapter. Great work, update soon.