for Darkest Days of the Fallen10/19/2008 c6 KerryRyan
dear helen
please continue this story!
i like how its going so far and you cant leave me hanging here!
i need to know what happens next!
dear helen
please continue this story!
i like how its going so far and you cant leave me hanging here!
i need to know what happens next!
2/20/2008 c5 DevilMadeYouCry
this is really interesting and cool and i hope Tyson gets back to normal soon i dun lke him being near that evil little b with an itch
this is really interesting and cool and i hope Tyson gets back to normal soon i dun lke him being near that evil little b with an itch
11/21/2007 c3 crystalbladedragon
wow this is an interesting story, really the first three chapters have me hooked...but poor tyson!..actually i'm alittle confused as to what happened to him i mean i got that he got sick and died..is ther going to be any more in depth explanation?, just wondering...anyway i seriously love your story so far..hope u update soon!
wow this is an interesting story, really the first three chapters have me hooked...but poor tyson!..actually i'm alittle confused as to what happened to him i mean i got that he got sick and died..is ther going to be any more in depth explanation?, just wondering...anyway i seriously love your story so far..hope u update soon!
8/30/2007 c3 
47DancerInTheDark101
I can't really say much in this review, I'm kinda on a time limit, but: I'm really enjoying this so far. Who is the main character going to be? Will it eventually be Tyson, or Kai? Or Saiyo?
Anyways, great work. Keep it up
DancerInTheDark101
47DancerInTheDark101I can't really say much in this review, I'm kinda on a time limit, but: I'm really enjoying this so far. Who is the main character going to be? Will it eventually be Tyson, or Kai? Or Saiyo?
Anyways, great work. Keep it up
DancerInTheDark101
8/30/2007 c2 DancerInTheDark101
Tyson's alive? WHOO! I'm not a big Tyson fan, but still...he's alive!
Great chapter.
Keep it up
DancerInTheDark101
Tyson's alive? WHOO! I'm not a big Tyson fan, but still...he's alive!
Great chapter.
Keep it up
DancerInTheDark101
8/30/2007 c1 DancerInTheDark101
hay there! This is really interesting so far. It's got a good mix of action, suspence, dialogue: the whole works. Can't wait to see how the rest turns out!
Keep up the good work
DancerInTheDark101
hay there! This is really interesting so far. It's got a good mix of action, suspence, dialogue: the whole works. Can't wait to see how the rest turns out!
Keep up the good work
DancerInTheDark101