2/1/2015 c1 22HateMePretty
This was absolutely amazing. They were so sweet, I was cooing over them- at one in the morning. You spun an amazing tale- I felt like I was there watching this all. Fremione is perfection, I must agree. Lovely work, keep it up!
XOXO
/Ever/
This was absolutely amazing. They were so sweet, I was cooing over them- at one in the morning. You spun an amazing tale- I felt like I was there watching this all. Fremione is perfection, I must agree. Lovely work, keep it up!
XOXO
/Ever/
5/23/2012 c1 18Roses of Dragonfire
you should write another fremione story! i really liked this one! great job!
you should write another fremione story! i really liked this one! great job!
8/4/2009 c1 Binka Fudge
I quite like this, especially the mention of the marauders, makes it more authentic. I like the message of live in the now, but it makes me sad because Fred supposedly died in DH. I'm still hiding behind the delusion that he was under some sort of suspension spell and they found out after the end of the main book when all the bodies were checked thoroughly by madam Pomfrey. Oh and Hermione and Ron weren't married in the epilogue, Ron just gave her a life to kings cross to see her and Fred's daughter Rose off to Hogwarts.
I quite like this, especially the mention of the marauders, makes it more authentic. I like the message of live in the now, but it makes me sad because Fred supposedly died in DH. I'm still hiding behind the delusion that he was under some sort of suspension spell and they found out after the end of the main book when all the bodies were checked thoroughly by madam Pomfrey. Oh and Hermione and Ron weren't married in the epilogue, Ron just gave her a life to kings cross to see her and Fred's daughter Rose off to Hogwarts.
12/5/2007 c1 7MadBrilliant1880
that was absolutely wonderful and i love the addition of the book by the marauders!
that was absolutely wonderful and i love the addition of the book by the marauders!
6/16/2007 c1 4Zoey24
I really like your writing style!
This Hermione/Fred oneshot is so awesome, you should totally make a sequel!
I really like your writing style!
This Hermione/Fred oneshot is so awesome, you should totally make a sequel!
4/5/2007 c1 7FarrahKaya
Hey there,
yeah, your style's cool: it's descriptive, well paced, and pulls the reader (ie me:P) along.
Something to keep in mind: occasionally, your scenes get a LITTLE choppy; the styles don't fit, or the sentences just don't flow.
Other than that, though, it was, overall, nicely written.
Good job!
JacintaM.
Hey there,
yeah, your style's cool: it's descriptive, well paced, and pulls the reader (ie me:P) along.
Something to keep in mind: occasionally, your scenes get a LITTLE choppy; the styles don't fit, or the sentences just don't flow.
Other than that, though, it was, overall, nicely written.
Good job!
JacintaM.
3/29/2007 c1 45Bella286
since the first book, i've always hoped Hermione to be with Harry, and with Draco in the fanfiction (and only there since they hate each other so much). But for a few weeks i'm fancing Hermione/fred (or georges), and i think they're really cute together! i liked your story, you did it very well and i really hope you'll write some more ! i'm a french girl (so please excuse my english), and i'm a bit disapointed to see there're so few fics with this pair. So please, keep writting, i'll follow you !lol well done miss! A bientot.x
since the first book, i've always hoped Hermione to be with Harry, and with Draco in the fanfiction (and only there since they hate each other so much). But for a few weeks i'm fancing Hermione/fred (or georges), and i think they're really cute together! i liked your story, you did it very well and i really hope you'll write some more ! i'm a french girl (so please excuse my english), and i'm a bit disapointed to see there're so few fics with this pair. So please, keep writting, i'll follow you !lol well done miss! A bientot.x