for Mechanics and Literature10/17/2014 c1 Guest
Yay, chocolate and wrenches.
There were typos but it was good
Yay, chocolate and wrenches.
There were typos but it was good
5/22/2008 c1 Gage Thomas
I really liked it. I've really been into Winry/Sciezka lately, and your story was excellent. Thank you!
I really liked it. I've really been into Winry/Sciezka lately, and your story was excellent. Thank you!
4/16/2008 c1 simplyEarthian
First Winry/Sciezka Story I have read, and I am Amazed. IT is adorable, and unlike other Girl/Girl stories I have read it wasnt smutty! WooHoo for actual Romance! lol.
-Kayla
First Winry/Sciezka Story I have read, and I am Amazed. IT is adorable, and unlike other Girl/Girl stories I have read it wasnt smutty! WooHoo for actual Romance! lol.
-Kayla
4/8/2008 c1 
30Madame President
i loved it! it was so cute! there isn't nearly enough shoji-ai in the fma fandom.
30Madame Presidenti loved it! it was so cute! there isn't nearly enough shoji-ai in the fma fandom.
1/13/2008 c1 5kissMe imDying
^_^ This fic made me smile!
You don't get enough reviews for this!
Very well-written. Sweet, simple, in character all the way. Winrey/Sciezska is one of my favorite pairings (next to Ed/Envy mew)
I find it very VERY difficult to obtain decent f/f fics T_T I'm straight and female but like this genre alot when it is well done and let me tell you, I have read many not-so-good f/f fics. This one? Outstanding.
Your contrasting development and sense of timing is wonderful ^^ I like how much alike they are and yet so from different worlds. Nothing feels out of place here. It's not smutt at all (which is too common among yuri fiction: AE: it's usually badly written or pure smutt or both) In fact, their relationship is sweet. I could so see them fitting into a perfect lifestyle with one another. KUDOS to ya!
Much love,
~Kmid
5kissMe imDying^_^ This fic made me smile!
You don't get enough reviews for this!
Very well-written. Sweet, simple, in character all the way. Winrey/Sciezska is one of my favorite pairings (next to Ed/Envy mew)
I find it very VERY difficult to obtain decent f/f fics T_T I'm straight and female but like this genre alot when it is well done and let me tell you, I have read many not-so-good f/f fics. This one? Outstanding.
Your contrasting development and sense of timing is wonderful ^^ I like how much alike they are and yet so from different worlds. Nothing feels out of place here. It's not smutt at all (which is too common among yuri fiction: AE: it's usually badly written or pure smutt or both) In fact, their relationship is sweet. I could so see them fitting into a perfect lifestyle with one another. KUDOS to ya!
Much love,
~Kmid
12/29/2007 c1 7Inundation
That was just... adoarble. You really have Winry and Sciezska (whose name I will never remember the correct spelling of) in character, and it does my heart good to see that. I never really thought of the two together, to be honest, but after I recieved the link to this story I think it might work, in the anime at least.
So, keep up the good work!
(FYI, you wrote "expirience," which should be "experience.")
7InundationThat was just... adoarble. You really have Winry and Sciezska (whose name I will never remember the correct spelling of) in character, and it does my heart good to see that. I never really thought of the two together, to be honest, but after I recieved the link to this story I think it might work, in the anime at least.
So, keep up the good work!
(FYI, you wrote "expirience," which should be "experience.")
5/21/2007 c1 dead-girls
I really enjoyed this. It was very good writing, and I also loved how they weren't out of character. Good job!
I really enjoyed this. It was very good writing, and I also loved how they weren't out of character. Good job!
3/15/2007 c1 Mentor Donatello
I applaud you for not hopping on the bandwagon and doing shonen ai (or RoyEd for that matter). :D;
I actually don't like slash, but I decided to read this only until it came to something that I found uncomfortable to read- which there was none of. I mean, there was a little kiss, but other than that, nothing to make a non-slash fan flee in terror. Good job so far. I found the repeated mentions of exact periods of time (eg: five fours) a little tedious, though. After the first time, you could've said "hours later" or "later in the day" or something. But it was pretty nice otherwise.
Take care!
I applaud you for not hopping on the bandwagon and doing shonen ai (or RoyEd for that matter). :D;
I actually don't like slash, but I decided to read this only until it came to something that I found uncomfortable to read- which there was none of. I mean, there was a little kiss, but other than that, nothing to make a non-slash fan flee in terror. Good job so far. I found the repeated mentions of exact periods of time (eg: five fours) a little tedious, though. After the first time, you could've said "hours later" or "later in the day" or something. But it was pretty nice otherwise.
Take care!