
7/10/2019 c5 Guest
I Really Like This Story Please Finish It
I Really Like This Story Please Finish It
3/8/2016 c5 Guest
Awwwwwwww. I really like this story but I understand. Good luck!
Awwwwwwww. I really like this story but I understand. Good luck!
8/21/2014 c1 ibna
I lllllovvvvvve it great
I lllllovvvvvve it great
7/14/2014 c3 hama431
Update chapter 5
Will the girls and kids forgive the boys
Who will save the kids
Update chapter 5
Will the girls and kids forgive the boys
Who will save the kids
6/15/2014 c4 Dani
Love it, please update soon ... :
Love it, please update soon ... :
3/26/2014 c4
4AkatsukiDragonRose
I love it. This fic is really really good. Please update soon, and keep up the good work!

I love it. This fic is really really good. Please update soon, and keep up the good work!
1/29/2014 c4 Guest
make a new chapter dammit!
make a new chapter dammit!
1/6/2014 c3
1PineapplexFudge Angel
what happened to the monthly updates? :'( sob and i really like this story. i really want to see how the relationships turn out after all this drama, and who's after them. PLEASE plz plz update soon! couldn't put this review on chapter 4 since i already reviewed a couple years ago.

what happened to the monthly updates? :'( sob and i really like this story. i really want to see how the relationships turn out after all this drama, and who's after them. PLEASE plz plz update soon! couldn't put this review on chapter 4 since i already reviewed a couple years ago.
10/20/2013 c4 Cool
I luv it but it needs a grammar check feel free to Text someone call sakuras unicorn she has an awesome editor
I luv it but it needs a grammar check feel free to Text someone call sakuras unicorn she has an awesome editor
7/18/2013 c4 Darkmiko blossom
This story is sooo cool and i love it ,its awesome i really hope u update soon cuz i wouldn't wanna miss it i really hope if i make storys u'll read and review u know cuz i have many ideas and mabe i can help u ,oh and is the children in or out of Kohana
This story is sooo cool and i love it ,its awesome i really hope u update soon cuz i wouldn't wanna miss it i really hope if i make storys u'll read and review u know cuz i have many ideas and mabe i can help u ,oh and is the children in or out of Kohana