for The Curtis Family Curse12/13/2007 c6 Lorina
YAY! AN UPDATE! haha. i like this chapter. it(especially the ending) seems pretty relevant to the story so i dont care- just so long as its not just some random filler. loved the story from the beginning. =]
YAY! AN UPDATE! haha. i like this chapter. it(especially the ending) seems pretty relevant to the story so i dont care- just so long as its not just some random filler. loved the story from the beginning. =]
5/6/2007 c4 sb
WOW GOOD STORY UPDATE SOON TWO BIT AND SODAPOP ARE AWESOME! SO IS STEVE! YAY!
WOW GOOD STORY UPDATE SOON TWO BIT AND SODAPOP ARE AWESOME! SO IS STEVE! YAY!
4/19/2007 c4 
13PurpleBlaze
Great story so far. I was one of the people wondering about Soda and Pony, so I'm glad you're planning to put something about them later.
13PurpleBlazeGreat story so far. I was one of the people wondering about Soda and Pony, so I'm glad you're planning to put something about them later.
4/16/2007 c3 Indigo
Great story very interesting! Sodapop and Ponyboy where are they? Other members of the gang? Should include the kids of the other gang maybe? Suspense
Great story very interesting! Sodapop and Ponyboy where are they? Other members of the gang? Should include the kids of the other gang maybe? Suspense
3/23/2007 c2 2Songbird Inked
k just some ideas
- make the girl (forgot her name already) come walking home alone ( idk from where) and get jumped by the guy in the ski mask
- make the 3 of them find a local gang and join them
- make sure to mention josh is a dropout
- make girls crazy over josh
- make simon appear in the story a bit more
just ideas so dont take any stuff i said to personally, its just my opinion
if u like, go ahead and use my ideas
im new and still cant write any stories yet so i dont really care
2Songbird Inkedk just some ideas
- make the girl (forgot her name already) come walking home alone ( idk from where) and get jumped by the guy in the ski mask
- make the 3 of them find a local gang and join them
- make sure to mention josh is a dropout
- make girls crazy over josh
- make simon appear in the story a bit more
just ideas so dont take any stuff i said to personally, its just my opinion
if u like, go ahead and use my ideas
im new and still cant write any stories yet so i dont really care
3/22/2007 c2 19soda-me
Well, this sounds like a good idea. But I agree with some of the other people, where are Pony and Soda? Wouldn't they be a part of their nephews' lives? I like how Two-Bit appeared though, even though I can't believe he's 52 years old! It's a bit weird having a girl, Andrea, taking Ponyboy's role in the story, but I guess I'll get used to it. =D
19soda-meWell, this sounds like a good idea. But I agree with some of the other people, where are Pony and Soda? Wouldn't they be a part of their nephews' lives? I like how Two-Bit appeared though, even though I can't believe he's 52 years old! It's a bit weird having a girl, Andrea, taking Ponyboy's role in the story, but I guess I'll get used to it. =D
3/22/2007 c2 Dallysangel
hmh, this is good you've included Two-Bit but I'm confused, What about Soda and Ponyboy, surely they'd be around or at least visiting their family after Darry's death. Guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out.
hmh, this is good you've included Two-Bit but I'm confused, What about Soda and Ponyboy, surely they'd be around or at least visiting their family after Darry's death. Guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out.
3/20/2007 c1 2Dallysangel
Ah Darry died the excat same way his parents did, weird, I like it. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
2DallysangelAh Darry died the excat same way his parents did, weird, I like it. Can't wait to see where you go with this.