for Reality Check: Taking The Long Way11/28 c9 estrellajuana291
I am amazed after reading this story and my favorite part is this when, I cringed as we walked out the door and down the hall. My lessons were being staggered on a three-day cycle: Firestarting and Fetching one day, Mage and Projective Empathy the next, then a day off to rest. And interspersed between those lessons I was reviewing history, religion, and law since Selenay had every intention of using me while I was there. Plus, I had weapons practice and was spending about two hours with Shay everyday. During my last lesson with Dirk, I'd accidentally set a small nearby bush on fire, along with the small piece of tinder I was trying to ignite.. And I really love these two characters (Jennifer), (tashir)&(shayna) and there role in story is amazing and I am wondering to draw these two for you and if you are interested so here's my,,,
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I am amazed after reading this story and my favorite part is this when, I cringed as we walked out the door and down the hall. My lessons were being staggered on a three-day cycle: Firestarting and Fetching one day, Mage and Projective Empathy the next, then a day off to rest. And interspersed between those lessons I was reviewing history, religion, and law since Selenay had every intention of using me while I was there. Plus, I had weapons practice and was spending about two hours with Shay everyday. During my last lesson with Dirk, I'd accidentally set a small nearby bush on fire, along with the small piece of tinder I was trying to ignite.. And I really love these two characters (Jennifer), (tashir)&(shayna) and there role in story is amazing and I am wondering to draw these two for you and if you are interested so here's my,,,
Discord: estrella_juana
Instagram: est_rellajuana
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6/30/2022 c5 
91TMI Fairy
To steal a line from another fic - "Jennifer woke to a delightfully sore hoo-haa."
91TMI FairyTo steal a line from another fic - "Jennifer woke to a delightfully sore hoo-haa."
7/19/2016 c9 sjscifan
One day I hope to see this story continue. I've loved both the first story and the second. Enjoyable characters and an interesting situation they find themselves in.
Please keep writing!
One day I hope to see this story continue. I've loved both the first story and the second. Enjoyable characters and an interesting situation they find themselves in.
Please keep writing!
8/18/2014 c1 dragonlord7012
[Just thought i'd state, I'd like to redact some of my criticism on your previous fic, i was not aware there was a sequal and i had thought it had come to a abrupt, and terrible end. Although this fic appears to be abandoned at the time I'm writing this, I'd still consider that a vast improvement.]
[Just thought i'd state, I'd like to redact some of my criticism on your previous fic, i was not aware there was a sequal and i had thought it had come to a abrupt, and terrible end. Although this fic appears to be abandoned at the time I'm writing this, I'd still consider that a vast improvement.]
7/3/2012 c9 9Doranwen
Against my will, I have been intrigued by these stories. Do you plan on continuing this one at any point? Despite being five years later, I hope you do, because I'm actually curious to read the rest, lol. (And for a Mary Sue-ish leaning story, that's pretty unusual-you write decently well.)
9DoranwenAgainst my will, I have been intrigued by these stories. Do you plan on continuing this one at any point? Despite being five years later, I hope you do, because I'm actually curious to read the rest, lol. (And for a Mary Sue-ish leaning story, that's pretty unusual-you write decently well.)
9/18/2011 c9 2Amber Talamasca
great story, lots of fun, and she's got an attitude i like :)
I see its been about 4 years since you updated this, but a girl can hope, no?
Thank you for writing!
2Amber Talamascagreat story, lots of fun, and she's got an attitude i like :)
I see its been about 4 years since you updated this, but a girl can hope, no?
Thank you for writing!
3/29/2011 c1 Diannika
that would explain why i remember the sequal as 'not as good' as the first...i hate wips...theyre automatically downgraded by a couple lvls till theyr complete
that would explain why i remember the sequal as 'not as good' as the first...i hate wips...theyre automatically downgraded by a couple lvls till theyr complete
9/12/2010 c9 Moonlight2B
Dude! You need to finish this story! I just spent the last 4 hours reading both Reality Checks, and I want to know what happens to Jennifer, dang it! So, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write the end to this story!
Dude! You need to finish this story! I just spent the last 4 hours reading both Reality Checks, and I want to know what happens to Jennifer, dang it! So, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write the end to this story!
10/17/2009 c9 18Almadynis Rayne
Is there any chance of more coming or should I give up while my hopes are high?
18Almadynis RayneIs there any chance of more coming or should I give up while my hopes are high?
5/29/2009 c9 Erica
wow starting to go in a direction that i never anticipated... well barring tashir cuddling up to punky... say it with me now aw
ok on to story... i should think that the americans would make provison for shayna and jays but it still leaves the thought are they going to be alright given that they are like guardian spirits type beings and what happened to karse and rethwellen and the shin-a-in and the tyldreas? maybe firesong would be able to fry the general! that would be good...
more please!
wow starting to go in a direction that i never anticipated... well barring tashir cuddling up to punky... say it with me now aw
ok on to story... i should think that the americans would make provison for shayna and jays but it still leaves the thought are they going to be alright given that they are like guardian spirits type beings and what happened to karse and rethwellen and the shin-a-in and the tyldreas? maybe firesong would be able to fry the general! that would be good...
more please!
5/29/2009 c7 Erica
YAY punky! happy little mind dance!
but seriously this new plot with alastor... i mena the fact that jen is shacked up with tashir...
oh well onwards!
YAY punky! happy little mind dance!
but seriously this new plot with alastor... i mena the fact that jen is shacked up with tashir...
oh well onwards!