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8/16/2010 c15 22BlackButterfly9
hahaha this story makes me laugh
12/30/2008 c15 Styloz
Loved the fight scenes lol, but it was a bit confusing. Well that's probably my fault because it's like 2am, and my brain tends to screw up at that time :P

Can't wait for an update :)
10/17/2008 c15 Flaming Hail
THAT WAS AWSOME Sora I don't love you any more
4/18/2008 c15 12eCZi
It's better if you didn't add the "And I didn't mean the fart."

Either way, I found that funny.

Wow, this is getting dramatic...

Now I know what you mean by what happened in my story reminding you of what happened in this story...

Wow.

I'm sorry.

I didn't mean to accidentally rip off of you.

I hope you're not mad.

D:

I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry.

Please, forgive me

;dknfasjdf

THIS IS SO DRAMATIC!

Oh, my GOSH! I wonder what's about to happen...

Well, Sora, Kairi, and Roxas made up, right?

Unless I read that wrong...

Then...

QWKnasjfd.

I don't wanna predict what happens...but I'm thinking there's gonna be a happy ending.

Probably.

Just not in a happy way.

LAWL.

Uhm...and I think I establish that through your constant "She'll come back to Roxas!" and your reviews...

That's kinda why I go "OR IS IT? BUAHAHAHA" in my author's notes, because I'm really good at spoiling a story.

That's just a fun fact for you.

:D

Dude, this is gettin' good...

Next chapt-OH WAIT...

there isn't another chapter, right...?

...so UPDATE SOON!

Should I blackmail you with my story?

Of which I got the next chapter half-written?

-chuckles evilly...then quickly transitions to maniacal laugh-

ljsnd;fkajdsf!

I can see that your writing improved throughout the story.

That's SO COOL!

:D

Well, update soon!

I'm putting this on alert!

And gave you thirteen, including this one, fourteen REVIEWS!

Pay your readers back with another chapter, alright?

ALRIGHTY?

Alright.

:D

update soon.
4/18/2008 c14 eCZi
DUDE.

Surprise!

I think Roxas's gonna...get beat up.

Or something.

It's not gonna be as peaceful as it is at the park.

So, since Kairi's at the park,

does that mean she made up with Sora?

Because then it would've been more chaotic.

AND WHAT ABOUT RIKU?

'DSLFNADSLKFNSDF

Next chapter. :D
4/18/2008 c13 eCZi
I HATE ANGRY ROXAS!

I love the Roxas when he's nice!

:D

That's why there's a nice Roxas in my story...who WAS an asshole, but we won't go there.

Geez, this is just "caught int he act" like everyother chapter...

INTENSE!

KNASLDIFNSDF!

That's kinda how my brother broke up with his girlfriend, because she kinda didn't pay as much attention to their relationship, as much as her friends, which I found somewhat...girlish,coming out of my brother.

WHATEVER.

Seriously, SUCKS FORTHEM.

Like, really!

'slnfa'osdkf!

Next chapter.
4/18/2008 c12 eCZi
Dude...

how did I KNOW Namine was gonna see that?

It's like...instinct.

Or, it's my unprdictability gland?

I'm not exactly sure.

But for a second there, I was like "Woah...I can't believe Namine DIDN'T see that!"

But, of course, she dud.

So, there's no help with that.

WHATREVER'epifnaz'dsklfm

NExt chapter.

:D
4/18/2008 c11 eCZi
OH, smart one, Namine!

Gosh, since Kairi helped Roxas...

BLEH!

My math sucks.

xD

Just ignore that.

LAWL.

Uhm...I don't think Namine's interested in Roxas anymore.

Like, I know she's nice and everything,

but I'd still do the whole bf/gf thing my bf.

So...

This story's just going down hill...like positive event-wise.

LSKJNFLKSJNDFASDF.

nextn ca';ishfa'se

n-d'pfkmnsdf.

GR.

I cna't even type it out.

"Next. Chapter. NOW!"

:D
4/18/2008 c10 eCZi
This is getting very, VERY complicated!

'ljaenfa;slkdnf!

Gosh, I would've disgused as someone, who surprisingly, was single.

Cuz, like a lot of people arent' single in this story!lasjkdf'zlskdmfa'sldkfma'sdlkfmasdfmalksdfma

makes me go a'lknm'aslkd!

'lonf'asdmgf

lakdmf

aojjfgpaiorjg

Next chapter?

I think that would work out fine.

XD

I'll calm down now,

this is getting god. :D
4/18/2008 c9 eCZi
Wow.

LAWL.

This is a first; a GOOD Larxene?

Dude, she was a BITCH in CoM!

I'm still stuck on her.

Trying to KICK HER DSAFJBASDG!

Anyways, this was really interesting.

LAWL, Reno.

XD

They look similar, like NOW!

I was watching Advent Children (Y'know, the Final Fantasy movie), and I was liek "ZOMG THAT LOOKS LIKE AXEL!"

LAWL.

So, next chapter.

:D
4/18/2008 c8 eCZi
PERFECT NAME FOR THE CHAPTER.

And, Roxas, dear, put the bra down.

I know, you want some action...

But, man, DO IT RIGHT!

GAWD.

REALLY, I can't believe you wouldn't notice if the girl of your dream's BRA IN YOUR HAND.

Gosh.

Retarded people sometimes.

asnfz'sljkfdmzsdf.

Nextchapter.
4/18/2008 c7 eCZi
YAY!

Kairi's informed os such ASHOLISH BEHAVIOUR...

But I would've been like Roxas in my story, "BULLSHIT!"

XD

He says that a lot to Seifer.

LAWL.

I'm glad it went out nicely...very nicely, in fact.

Very, VERy, unaturally smoothe.

:D

Well, onward to the next chapter!

SEFIER CAN GO SUCK.

LAWL.

Next chaprewrawek;lfmna;lsdjkfasdf

l'askdmfaf.
4/18/2008 c6 eCZi
LAWL.

I loved the little skit at the end.

It was corny, but I loved it anyways.

:D

And I wonder what Roxas'll say when he hears about Seifer and Namine

OHMIGAWH!

I'm so PSYCHED!

LAWL.

Seriously.

Gawd.

NEXT CHAPTER.

I'm So sorry these are so short..

but whatever!

I've got like nince more chapters to go!

:D

NEXT CHAPTER
4/18/2008 c5 eCZi
WOAH.

I got scared, I was like "That's jerkish to leave someone out like that and nobody come to his rescue."

But luckily, Sora came to the rescue.

They better make up.

lksdanfaslkdfasdf...

Namine's kinda angry!

I wouldn't do that.

I would've been like "Hello?"

And stuff.

Not slam it in his face.

It's not like she fell out of love with him...

RIGHT.

RIGHT?

oh, whatever.

NEXT CHAPTER.
4/18/2008 c4 eCZi
OH MY GOSH.

INTENSE.

Dude, I'm not exactly sure as to how that was a crime...

Maybe I'm just not smart.

Because I'm not really smart.

Just when I write, makes me look like it.

xD

Or does it? (BUAHAHAHAHAHA.)

Then again, smart is but a perspective.

so...

;~1.

WELL, NEXT CHAPTER...

I think the nesxt review might be a few minutes late.

My brother's is the wardrobe BASTARD, and I gotta watch!

:D

BUt, next chapter anyways!
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