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12/2/2019 c1 ae2000x
oh this is AMAZING!
8/11/2012 c1 Guest
This is really deep. Nice. Agh, I cant think of a more precise word.
3/20/2011 c1 woo
This was really good! Maiko ftw! Thanks for sharing. :)
12/27/2007 c1 NotReal401
This was nice. But to be honest the real reason im reviewing is so that you would have an even 20 reviews. lol.

Nice story though. :)
12/21/2007 c1 52Zohh
Very nice. :)
12/21/2007 c1 Burakku's Shadow
Aw...! X3 That was so precious!

This was really creative! And for once, it doesn't need anything to follow it (like a sequel), which is really awesome!

Are all of my sentences ended with an exclamation mark? OO

~Burakku's Shadow/Manjoume-Enchantress
12/20/2007 c1 2maikoxshipper
aww, how cute! I enjoyed this :)
12/20/2007 c1 15klainelynch
Great story, I love it!
12/20/2007 c1 3CasaNova73099
Wow. I could have seen this actually happening in the series (ala *flashback mode). Pretty good job.
12/20/2007 c1 8BadassxKunoichi
Cute! I loved it! I'm not really a Mai/Zuko fan..but I couldn't resist. It's just too cute! Love it!
11/17/2007 c1 defunct111
Nice oneshot! Very good.
11/14/2007 c1 153Mira-Jade
This was too cute! I liked the line about her not deserving a scar on her face - I love all sorts of foreshadowing, so that was a nice touch. The end with the hawk in the sky was perfect.

A great job - nice piece of writing here.
5/1/2007 c1 27Lost In A Dark Wood
Oh that's so sweet. I like the hawk, and the fact that Zuko doesn't want Mai to have a scar, sad sad irony.

I always thought it was a pity Zuko's pet hawk got written out.
4/19/2007 c1 32Phoenix'sSoul
This was how do you say, nice I suppose. It feels like you can do more with it if you chose to. "Until the Next Chapter"
4/13/2007 c1 8knittingpanda
I'm not a big Maiko fan, but I like this. It shows Zuko's good side.
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