for Why Jiraiya Doesn't Babysit9/17/2012 c1 Inori. D
Very funny, the poor kids had the perverted Jiraiya as a babysitter, there went their innocence and childhood.
Very funny, the poor kids had the perverted Jiraiya as a babysitter, there went their innocence and childhood.
9/9/2012 c1 Random
You should put more details about the characters. But it was funny. I wonder what Jiraiya told them. Please make a side story about Sakura and Sasuke's family.
You should put more details about the characters. But it was funny. I wonder what Jiraiya told them. Please make a side story about Sakura and Sasuke's family.
2/26/2012 c1 
10Null Nunh
Those poor, poor kids they don't deserve that pervert as a babysitter; I mean they've done nothing wrong.
10Null NunhThose poor, poor kids they don't deserve that pervert as a babysitter; I mean they've done nothing wrong.
8/2/2011 c1 4AnimeLoverHaruka
I think Jiraiya just scarred the poor kids. I was laughing really hard as I read this. It's a great story.
4AnimeLoverHarukaI think Jiraiya just scarred the poor kids. I was laughing really hard as I read this. It's a great story.
3/12/2011 c1 17hinatasgreatestfan
This was hilarious. I loved the idea of Jiraiya explaining babies and their origins. I'm not totally clear what scared the kids, though. What, did they think Hinata was going to die or something? You didn't make that very clear. Beyond that, very good one-shot.
17hinatasgreatestfanThis was hilarious. I loved the idea of Jiraiya explaining babies and their origins. I'm not totally clear what scared the kids, though. What, did they think Hinata was going to die or something? You didn't make that very clear. Beyond that, very good one-shot.
3/7/2010 c1 5Rose Tiger
This was so funny! You should make a sequel or an omake after this! I want to see how Naruto and Hinata reacts through all of this.
5Rose TigerThis was so funny! You should make a sequel or an omake after this! I want to see how Naruto and Hinata reacts through all of this.