for Visitation: Advocate9/1/2007 c1 
4dlsky
Hi, long time to go without answering or fulfilling your request I know, I have to say I'm sorry and bow my head. If you still recall you asked me to look into your stories and to let you know what I make of them or found. You asked only about your Teen Titans ones and seeing as this is one of them I chose to begin with this oneshot. I'm not entiorly sure what you were getting at with this (I could make some strange guesses but I'd just rather not) however on the ignored side of reviews...I did find this a rather good piece of exercise work. To challenge your structure, make something coherent, and share a dictoritive peice (passing it off as a story blob) Fan Fiction style and working to make it something enjoyable. I found that facinating and rather appealing. I think it was a well done piece of literaty exercise and challenge. (Hope I'm not reading more into this then there was, but I find it rare to see works like this.) Thus far only finding one about French doctren and a conversation wrote by a college level student piting Madome Ruse and Robin aginst each other. Not that was a turely unique and cool work of literary writing. (off to the next on...and sorry about the spelling I've been working on my own stuff so I'm in the mode to just let my hands and mind free write and not stop my fingers or go back and fix things as I type. Sorry, later dlsky
4dlskyHi, long time to go without answering or fulfilling your request I know, I have to say I'm sorry and bow my head. If you still recall you asked me to look into your stories and to let you know what I make of them or found. You asked only about your Teen Titans ones and seeing as this is one of them I chose to begin with this oneshot. I'm not entiorly sure what you were getting at with this (I could make some strange guesses but I'd just rather not) however on the ignored side of reviews...I did find this a rather good piece of exercise work. To challenge your structure, make something coherent, and share a dictoritive peice (passing it off as a story blob) Fan Fiction style and working to make it something enjoyable. I found that facinating and rather appealing. I think it was a well done piece of literaty exercise and challenge. (Hope I'm not reading more into this then there was, but I find it rare to see works like this.) Thus far only finding one about French doctren and a conversation wrote by a college level student piting Madome Ruse and Robin aginst each other. Not that was a turely unique and cool work of literary writing. (off to the next on...and sorry about the spelling I've been working on my own stuff so I'm in the mode to just let my hands and mind free write and not stop my fingers or go back and fix things as I type. Sorry, later dlsky
3/23/2007 c1 23ThSamurai
All throughout this little tid bit I had the feeling of being in "The Construct", you know that blank starting slate from The Matrix. All the characters are there complaining about something different. It was interesting to say the least. So are you suggesting that I make myself an "Advocate" of my own?
And I haven't updated because I want to do it all on Monday. I'm hpoing I can update KotD, Season8, and possibly a new story that's been brewing in my head.
Nice little short story. Laters!
ThSamurai -
23ThSamuraiAll throughout this little tid bit I had the feeling of being in "The Construct", you know that blank starting slate from The Matrix. All the characters are there complaining about something different. It was interesting to say the least. So are you suggesting that I make myself an "Advocate" of my own?
And I haven't updated because I want to do it all on Monday. I'm hpoing I can update KotD, Season8, and possibly a new story that's been brewing in my head.
Nice little short story. Laters!
ThSamurai -
3/22/2007 c1 Big Boyy
i like it, and sense i'm your friend/proofreader, i know who the other charecters mentioned were. the story was well written and interesting and i hope to see more like them. also, i give full permishion and a slight request, for you to add a chapter with my charecter in it (sort of as his introduction into fanfiction)
good story, keep them coming, and i can't wait to see the ext chapter of the ripple effect.
i like it, and sense i'm your friend/proofreader, i know who the other charecters mentioned were. the story was well written and interesting and i hope to see more like them. also, i give full permishion and a slight request, for you to add a chapter with my charecter in it (sort of as his introduction into fanfiction)
good story, keep them coming, and i can't wait to see the ext chapter of the ripple effect.
3/22/2007 c1 13LittleMissWriter91
Lol. It's okay, I forgive you. Believe it or not, but I actully laughed. But I still want to know when my character appears. Will she have a big roll or a small roll? It's just a minor question, but i would like an awnser.
Talk to you soon!
~*Tsukikage1213*~
13LittleMissWriter91Lol. It's okay, I forgive you. Believe it or not, but I actully laughed. But I still want to know when my character appears. Will she have a big roll or a small roll? It's just a minor question, but i would like an awnser.
Talk to you soon!
~*Tsukikage1213*~
3/22/2007 c1 10StarWonder09
I really like the way it was written. Enough was revealed to give you a feeling about what was going on, but it still leaves you slightly confused and curious as to what happens next. The idea is original, I don’t recall ever seeing a TT fic like this, and it is really intriguing! I look forward to future chapters.
10StarWonder09I really like the way it was written. Enough was revealed to give you a feeling about what was going on, but it still leaves you slightly confused and curious as to what happens next. The idea is original, I don’t recall ever seeing a TT fic like this, and it is really intriguing! I look forward to future chapters.