for Dreamdawn12/4/2007 c1 
1MaxManuka
please continue :)
this really gets interesting, i like your style of writing, one of the better of this only a dozen TLJ fics here at :D :)
1MaxManukaplease continue :)
this really gets interesting, i like your style of writing, one of the better of this only a dozen TLJ fics here at :D :)
6/5/2007 c1 9EagleRay
Oh yeah, I was totally disappointed in the ending too. I'm more than willing to see what you think.
9EagleRayOh yeah, I was totally disappointed in the ending too. I'm more than willing to see what you think.
4/8/2007 c1 15Flatlander
I'm sorry it's taking so long to add another chapter. My PC went kaput after I overclocked it a little too much, plus I have to reinstall windows. It's almost completely fixed up now; story will continue soon. Thanks for the reviews! Oh, and yes, I thought about how Zoe woke up quite early here, but I figured that so many other fanfics on the story woke her up late or not at all, and I wanted it fast-paced. So, there.
15FlatlanderI'm sorry it's taking so long to add another chapter. My PC went kaput after I overclocked it a little too much, plus I have to reinstall windows. It's almost completely fixed up now; story will continue soon. Thanks for the reviews! Oh, and yes, I thought about how Zoe woke up quite early here, but I figured that so many other fanfics on the story woke her up late or not at all, and I wanted it fast-paced. So, there.