
7/18/2015 c1 Guest
I liked this! Um, I thought that when elevators stopped working because the electricity was cut off, that the only way the elevators would fall back to the ground floor is if one of the supporting cables was damaged, and that otherwise the elevators stay where they are when the power goes off. I don't actually know that for a fact, but that's what I thought happened.
I liked this! Um, I thought that when elevators stopped working because the electricity was cut off, that the only way the elevators would fall back to the ground floor is if one of the supporting cables was damaged, and that otherwise the elevators stay where they are when the power goes off. I don't actually know that for a fact, but that's what I thought happened.
7/12/2013 c1 Grace
Cool chapter really sets the mood for an epic story
Cool chapter really sets the mood for an epic story
10/18/2011 c1
46Akajo
You gave me some hope. If there's snow in my town, I'm gonna have a sexy boyfriend too? *.*
I like this story. Short but really nice.
Bye,
Shad :)

You gave me some hope. If there's snow in my town, I'm gonna have a sexy boyfriend too? *.*
I like this story. Short but really nice.
Bye,
Shad :)
11/28/2009 c1 Mic
do a sequal i wanna know what happens to them.
do a sequal i wanna know what happens to them.
4/18/2009 c1 Aysia-san
Lovely lovely lovely! :D
A sequel would be kinda beautiful to this one - or, very beautiful ^^!
Lovely lovely lovely! :D
A sequel would be kinda beautiful to this one - or, very beautiful ^^!
11/2/2007 c1
1OooO.AngelicChaos.OooO
...hahahaha lookie!...im honoring your writting!...lol...but its an UBBER kawaii story!...but i just love the last part (where the uy was like..."i don't get paid enough for this crap!"...lol

...hahahaha lookie!...im honoring your writting!...lol...but its an UBBER kawaii story!...but i just love the last part (where the uy was like..."i don't get paid enough for this crap!"...lol
4/14/2007 c1 hibiki96
Okay, I like-a-da story, but you're so cruel for not giving it an end-P.S. it's not that long, especially when someone sits down for 17 hours straight to read a 670 word story, yes i've done it more than once
Okay, I like-a-da story, but you're so cruel for not giving it an end-P.S. it's not that long, especially when someone sits down for 17 hours straight to read a 670 word story, yes i've done it more than once
4/11/2007 c1
2Kunoichi Sabaku no Gaara
despite the length, wich is sumthiong im kinda used to, its still pretty good
but the ending sux
sum ppl dnt hav very good imaginations
those of us who do dnt follow othr ppls' stories very well unless its made clear wat is intended, in othr words, we dnt have enuf imagination to end sumone elses story
its really good tho and i would hav liked to c a bettr ending to make it bettr ovrall

despite the length, wich is sumthiong im kinda used to, its still pretty good
but the ending sux
sum ppl dnt hav very good imaginations
those of us who do dnt follow othr ppls' stories very well unless its made clear wat is intended, in othr words, we dnt have enuf imagination to end sumone elses story
its really good tho and i would hav liked to c a bettr ending to make it bettr ovrall
3/31/2007 c1
2Jewny
continuation neh? my sdk fever has suddenly risen up again after years of dormant. hehe great one-shot!

continuation neh? my sdk fever has suddenly risen up again after years of dormant. hehe great one-shot!
3/29/2007 c1
2embargo
AH! THIS WAS SOO GOOD! IT WAS SOO GOOD I'M ACTUALLY YELLING! NOO! PLEASE! IT CAN'T BE A ONE-SHOT! IT'S TOO GOOD! TT_TT ok, I'm alright... I love all your SDK stories. they're very good. ESPECIALLY THIS ONE! heh, heh... sorry... you're a very good writer! I hope you put up more stories soon! ^^

AH! THIS WAS SOO GOOD! IT WAS SOO GOOD I'M ACTUALLY YELLING! NOO! PLEASE! IT CAN'T BE A ONE-SHOT! IT'S TOO GOOD! TT_TT ok, I'm alright... I love all your SDK stories. they're very good. ESPECIALLY THIS ONE! heh, heh... sorry... you're a very good writer! I hope you put up more stories soon! ^^