for Titanic II12/19/2008 c5 2202wisdomgirl
You have some very good ideas. This story is going great so far so well done! I like the idea of bringing back Cal, Rose and Jack into this.
I think you'll have to go over this story and check for spelling mistakes and check whether it makes sense or not. Otherwise good story!
You have some very good ideas. This story is going great so far so well done! I like the idea of bringing back Cal, Rose and Jack into this.
I think you'll have to go over this story and check for spelling mistakes and check whether it makes sense or not. Otherwise good story!
10/15/2008 c16 
7Kayley Taylor
Yay, an update! XD
If you're thinking of adding more deleted scenes, maybe you could just rewrite the whole story? I mean, if you're feeling that ambitious/creative, why not, eh? Just a suggestion. :D
7Kayley TaylorYay, an update! XD
If you're thinking of adding more deleted scenes, maybe you could just rewrite the whole story? I mean, if you're feeling that ambitious/creative, why not, eh? Just a suggestion. :D
3/22/2008 c15 Artemis Mills
Wow i absolutely loved this story! Tonight i watched Titanic and after i went fanfic hunting for a good story and your's was the best ive read all night! Good job =3
~ Aya
PS: Totally do a sequel!
Wow i absolutely loved this story! Tonight i watched Titanic and after i went fanfic hunting for a good story and your's was the best ive read all night! Good job =3
~ Aya
PS: Totally do a sequel!
1/17/2008 c1 1SNOWDRIVER
hello! My name is ACTUALLY Jaina.Theif,joking. Though my name is actually Jaina...so yeah. I love the Titanic,and Star Wars!
I'm from Lucas Nine. Don't tell master Skywalker i'm here.He'd kill me. Good stories! Cuu-Nar, Lamar.
{BYE!}
1SNOWDRIVERhello! My name is ACTUALLY Jaina.Theif,joking. Though my name is actually Jaina...so yeah. I love the Titanic,and Star Wars!
I'm from Lucas Nine. Don't tell master Skywalker i'm here.He'd kill me. Good stories! Cuu-Nar, Lamar.
{BYE!}
12/21/2007 c15 7Kayley Taylor
Married at sixteen? Gosh...I couldn't do it. LOL.
Aww sad to see that it's the end. It's up to you if you want a sequel, though. I have no ideas.
7Kayley TaylorMarried at sixteen? Gosh...I couldn't do it. LOL.
Aww sad to see that it's the end. It's up to you if you want a sequel, though. I have no ideas.
9/5/2007 c14 14AdriannaLili
nnoo write more soon please i can't wait i wnat ot read more soon. hurry hurry
14AdriannaLilinnoo write more soon please i can't wait i wnat ot read more soon. hurry hurry
8/18/2007 c2 1BeccaEfron
Its very good so far, but you need to improve with spelling.
But on the other hand its very good and keep it up!
Becca
1BeccaEfronIts very good so far, but you need to improve with spelling.
But on the other hand its very good and keep it up!
Becca
7/7/2007 c2 Anon.Y.Mouse
History repeats itself? Good story :-)
History repeats itself? Good story :-)
6/30/2007 c14 2Lady Charlotte of Belgium
Hi! The story's great! Except that there is something confusing. They already live in America and they went to Europe so how come now they are in New York again?
Also, you spelled Europe wrong lots of times!
But I like the main idea of the story! I hope this is not the end of the story!
2Lady Charlotte of BelgiumHi! The story's great! Except that there is something confusing. They already live in America and they went to Europe so how come now they are in New York again?
Also, you spelled Europe wrong lots of times!
But I like the main idea of the story! I hope this is not the end of the story!
6/24/2007 c14 7Kayley Taylor
Don't know why they're going to Wisconson yet...but update and let us know!
7Kayley TaylorDon't know why they're going to Wisconson yet...but update and let us know!
6/5/2007 c13 Riley
Great that she got her memory back!
Great that she got her memory back!
6/2/2007 c13 Kayley Taylor
Good that Jackie got her memory back...at least a little bit anyways. You're welcome! :]
Good that Jackie got her memory back...at least a little bit anyways. You're welcome! :]
5/30/2007 c12 Kayley Taylor
If I were you, I'd try wrapping this up soon since Jackie got her memory back and whatnot. But if you want to keep going, then go right ahead!
If I were you, I'd try wrapping this up soon since Jackie got her memory back and whatnot. But if you want to keep going, then go right ahead!
5/26/2007 c11 Kayley Taylor
Good chapter! The song goes great with this chapter. I wonder how Jackie is going to realize she met her parents in a poker game and didn't realize it...sounds like something that would happen to me if I lost my memory! LOL Keep it up!
Good chapter! The song goes great with this chapter. I wonder how Jackie is going to realize she met her parents in a poker game and didn't realize it...sounds like something that would happen to me if I lost my memory! LOL Keep it up!