
4/18/2019 c37 13torches
A bitter view, but how else would a race written to be villains feel about the universe.
A bitter view, but how else would a race written to be villains feel about the universe.
4/18/2019 c36 13torches
That was a bit confusing. I confess I skipped a few passages. But the gist of it seemed to progress the story, so...kudos!
That was a bit confusing. I confess I skipped a few passages. But the gist of it seemed to progress the story, so...kudos!
4/18/2019 c33 13torches
A change in voice is creeping into the narration. I am not sure how to react to this. I will wait and see how it goes.
A change in voice is creeping into the narration. I am not sure how to react to this. I will wait and see how it goes.