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9/25/2009 c1 Live For You
It was cute :3 I liked the middle part, where he said 'everytime' so many times. :) cute.
7/13/2009 c1 Araleen
Aww. Its's so cute and sweet. I can imagine Natsume thinking that. Some of Natsume's language like "That is" and stuff like that would be better as that but I love the idea and how you've written it.

Araleen
12/11/2008 c1 1DulcetPoison
aw thats so sweet! haha loved it! :d
7/26/2007 c1 3tokyobend17
It was real cute! =)

And Natsume was so sweet. XD

I wish I could right like this. :|

But no, no, no. Oh well! Loved the fic by the way. ;)

Write more! =)

~ a.S.
6/4/2007 c1 xXCandyGirlXx
ah this is so kawaii!hey will you write more?its so good!hehehe one of my favorite gakuen alice!please write more!

-candy
4/20/2007 c1 12Shiori's Notebook
AW! That's so sweet and kawai!

I like THESE lines:

1)Every time I see you drool over Howalons, it makes me wish I was a Howalon as well.

-Funny =) but very witty

2)... Everytime I look at you, I am reminded of how much I love you

-SO SWET!

Definitely one of my faves!

Please make more! It's so kawai!

Ja ne! :D

=Annick
4/3/2007 c1 28zaphyrus of the moon
very nice!

kind'a poetic, w/c is why i love it! keep smashing that keyboard for more fics like this.

kiddy romance is so cute
4/3/2007 c1 2anime-shortstuff
Ha! Guys must surrender under the wraths of the ways of girls! ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! wait, did that make sense, cause that is supposed to sound evil... hm, guess not. wait, what am i saying? oh! yeah, your story was so awesome, i totally loved it, even though i don't know storyline of the manga very well. T.T
4/3/2007 c1 2glenda23
aww soo.pasionate (sp) but its cute taht he thinkks of her that way
4/1/2007 c1 7neverbetter21
that was a nice story...cute too...=)
3/31/2007 c1 staarlee-chan
Yey! that was cute ^_^
3/31/2007 c1 kinkyuri
"Every time I see you drool over Howalons, it makes me wish I was a Howalon as well."... whoa. OwO Brave Natsume. XD

Natsume's so sweet. :3
3/31/2007 c1 2CheesezCake
it's so nice..cute..romantic..hehe..
3/31/2007 c1 2HelenaLaVince
kawaii...
3/30/2007 c1 tinkerbellie
aww.. its so sweet! hay.. day dream..
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