for The Sex She Slipped Into My Coffee9/13/2010 c1 
6Asya55
I think I just died for few minutes, WOW, HAWT, is all I can say, I'd take Dean over coffee anytime LOL, great that was great, I can go die somewhere else imagining Dean like that... *Thud* ;P
6Asya55I think I just died for few minutes, WOW, HAWT, is all I can say, I'd take Dean over coffee anytime LOL, great that was great, I can go die somewhere else imagining Dean like that... *Thud* ;P
6/8/2010 c1 BlueEyedPisces
Is it wrong to be absolutely envious of a fictional character? lol, cause seriously who the hell wouldn't want to take some nibbles out of Dean.
Is it wrong to be absolutely envious of a fictional character? lol, cause seriously who the hell wouldn't want to take some nibbles out of Dean.
7/27/2009 c1 22deansbabygirl934
oh my god...i think i might have slash backs for a while..it made me light headed..
22deansbabygirl934oh my god...i think i might have slash backs for a while..it made me light headed..
6/2/2009 c1 Deedle2226
First, I'd like to say that I don't usually post a review. I should because there are so many great stories and the authors should get the feedback they deserve, but I never know what to say that isn't simply "Great job, keep it up!" and though this is usually enough, I'd like to be more meaningful than that. Now that I'm done rambling I want to let you know that this piece of writing is fantastic. Your descriptions are captivating and your character is extremely likable as well as easy to relate to. You are a truly great writer and I hope you choose to continue with writing if only because, put simply, you write they way I, and I assume a lot of others in this world, think.
First, I'd like to say that I don't usually post a review. I should because there are so many great stories and the authors should get the feedback they deserve, but I never know what to say that isn't simply "Great job, keep it up!" and though this is usually enough, I'd like to be more meaningful than that. Now that I'm done rambling I want to let you know that this piece of writing is fantastic. Your descriptions are captivating and your character is extremely likable as well as easy to relate to. You are a truly great writer and I hope you choose to continue with writing if only because, put simply, you write they way I, and I assume a lot of others in this world, think.
8/24/2008 c1 8Kentcharm
super funny, *blushes* I can really relate to this girl. Our sense of humor are almost identical. Love it.
8Kentcharmsuper funny, *blushes* I can really relate to this girl. Our sense of humor are almost identical. Love it.
6/17/2007 c1 1apparentlykatie
I've read it like a few dozen times so I thought I'd leave a review.
Amazing story, probably my favorite oneshot. Love the style of narration. One of the only beleivable OFCs I've read in a Supernatural fic.
Keep up the amazing work !
1apparentlykatieI've read it like a few dozen times so I thought I'd leave a review.
Amazing story, probably my favorite oneshot. Love the style of narration. One of the only beleivable OFCs I've read in a Supernatural fic.
Keep up the amazing work !
4/29/2007 c1 23Zelost-Mind
Guh. How come I'm only just reading this? That turned me to goo, I should probably be ashamed about how much I enjoyed it. Your OFC is wonderful, I love her, and your Dean? God.
Thank you for sharing it.
23Zelost-MindGuh. How come I'm only just reading this? That turned me to goo, I should probably be ashamed about how much I enjoyed it. Your OFC is wonderful, I love her, and your Dean? God.
Thank you for sharing it.
4/10/2007 c1 12Mirajane Scarlet
Me again. (Like it'd be anybody else, right?) I actually read this one first but forgot to review it. Like everybody else who reviewed this, I can say this was pretty much awesome. And one other thing, you're only sixteen? And you wrote that sex scene? Impressive. Very nice work. lol. And also, like a lot of other people said, that was...well..it was just a great scene. lol.
12Mirajane ScarletMe again. (Like it'd be anybody else, right?) I actually read this one first but forgot to review it. Like everybody else who reviewed this, I can say this was pretty much awesome. And one other thing, you're only sixteen? And you wrote that sex scene? Impressive. Very nice work. lol. And also, like a lot of other people said, that was...well..it was just a great scene. lol.
4/8/2007 c1 9The Goddess Aurora
Oh Wow. Pretty much my only coherent thought.
It's fitting that Lauren was a caffeine addict like Dean. Do I really need to tell you how amazing that was? Because, damn, it was.
I love that her thoughts bled into the narrative, it seemed more real. And the description (not of just the sex) totally awesome. I could probably go on forever, but I think that about covers it within the non-obsessive-fangirl realm.
9The Goddess AuroraOh Wow. Pretty much my only coherent thought.
It's fitting that Lauren was a caffeine addict like Dean. Do I really need to tell you how amazing that was? Because, damn, it was.
I love that her thoughts bled into the narrative, it seemed more real. And the description (not of just the sex) totally awesome. I could probably go on forever, but I think that about covers it within the non-obsessive-fangirl realm.
4/6/2007 c1 4Lilmisshardygirl
Oh my. Um whoah. Yeah that was just sorry I can't get anything coherent out at the moment.
4LilmisshardygirlOh my. Um whoah. Yeah that was just sorry I can't get anything coherent out at the moment.
4/3/2007 c1 lovestoread
that was an incredibly hot fic! I was certainly entralled and its got me wanting more of Dean and Lauren. They certainly are HOTT together especially the sex! WOW! Now that was something!
that was an incredibly hot fic! I was certainly entralled and its got me wanting more of Dean and Lauren. They certainly are HOTT together especially the sex! WOW! Now that was something!
4/2/2007 c1 Neha
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! *screams with joy*
That was amazing! Just amazing! Please hold on while I try to breathe... ok..ahem...
This line had me laughing for a good minute- it was ‘oh hell no’ o’clock, from my calculations. LOL!
and this one too- I couldn’t josh the liquid around, risk spilling it over my hands – or worse, onto the concrete. I need it, damnit. Couldn’t lose any of it. Mine. Mine. Mine.
LOL! Lauren is addicted to caffeine! Hm...I always thought it was Dean. lol
And this had me giggling for a good few minutes- At least those thoughts were a guaranteed way to way me warm up a little...Just genius!
And porny-mushy-morning sex is just wow! lol!
I loved it!
Thank you so much, once again!
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! *screams with joy*
That was amazing! Just amazing! Please hold on while I try to breathe... ok..ahem...
This line had me laughing for a good minute- it was ‘oh hell no’ o’clock, from my calculations. LOL!
and this one too- I couldn’t josh the liquid around, risk spilling it over my hands – or worse, onto the concrete. I need it, damnit. Couldn’t lose any of it. Mine. Mine. Mine.
LOL! Lauren is addicted to caffeine! Hm...I always thought it was Dean. lol
And this had me giggling for a good few minutes- At least those thoughts were a guaranteed way to way me warm up a little...Just genius!
And porny-mushy-morning sex is just wow! lol!
I loved it!
Thank you so much, once again!
4/2/2007 c1 Diva0789
for the record i LOVE how you write...i love that ending. he keeps trying to convince her he is better than coffee. not that i would need convincing! lol...cant wiait for more BIT and all your wonderful one-shots...are yout he one who writes that ABBA story?...i think so...but im a bit scatter brains..midterms an all...well, i cant wait for mroe of that! if your not the author then ignor my ramblings...
for the record i LOVE how you write...i love that ending. he keeps trying to convince her he is better than coffee. not that i would need convincing! lol...cant wiait for more BIT and all your wonderful one-shots...are yout he one who writes that ABBA story?...i think so...but im a bit scatter brains..midterms an all...well, i cant wait for mroe of that! if your not the author then ignor my ramblings...