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5/5/2010 c2 5animerockluver
-in ominous voice-write more -in normal voice- it's true you can never get enough tenten fics ive been here for two months now going through all the fics except the nejiten(not a supporter)
1/3/2010 c2 4Morningstar138
hahahaha! sakura bashing! i like it although sakura is not a bad character, i just find it funny how the sakura bashing is going on in ur story. ROFL! sakura goes emo! dun dun dun! hahaha! the couple naruten is ok, a bit obvious in this story but i ain't complainin' hahaha! wel i like this story! keep writing, want to know who akuma is. :D
9/15/2008 c2 1Black Volcarona
great
4/14/2007 c2 2BlazexFlame
rawrz i like!

ther should be hecka more naruten fics

i would write one myself, but im not entirely

sure of tenten's personality since she doesn't make

many appearances. this means whatever fic i write her

in will sound forced T_T

newayz plz continue!

Blaze
4/7/2007 c1 28Bastion Lightz
Well, this is a good start. hope to see more in the future.
4/5/2007 c1 Irishfighter
cool chapter, please update as soon as you can.
4/5/2007 c1 18Destineylegend
That was a good start, I like the NaruxTen pairing. I hope you update soon, this'll be fun. Till next time then.
4/5/2007 c1 nakamaru122
Very Interesting. Try not to make the oc too strong because she is only twelve. I can't really preach though because my story is a super naruto.

OcxLee. He deserves it.

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