
5/5/2017 c9 Zack the awesome
Well an awesome author you are not! A great story teller, and I like that this has an actual original thought to it. But damn. We need an update!
Even if you don't update, just wanted to let you know that this is very well written... except I don't like the fact that two random metahumans can take down three of the titans, but I know that they needed to move to story along.
Well an awesome author you are not! A great story teller, and I like that this has an actual original thought to it. But damn. We need an update!
Even if you don't update, just wanted to let you know that this is very well written... except I don't like the fact that two random metahumans can take down three of the titans, but I know that they needed to move to story along.
5/17/2014 c9 the missing link
love this storywhens the next update?
love this storywhens the next update?
12/28/2011 c9
1Woodland Sprite
Very graphic I must say and that doesn't include your Author Notes. ^-^' heh heh
I really love the story and though I didn't review till now it was because I read all 9 chapters. I couldn't not read what was in front of me. I mean come on, it was really good. Gorey and well written.
Well, I hope you update soon though I see you haven't... Anyway, please finish the story you have ever so graced us (me) with.
And so I wait... Hopefully not for long, I pray.

Very graphic I must say and that doesn't include your Author Notes. ^-^' heh heh
I really love the story and though I didn't review till now it was because I read all 9 chapters. I couldn't not read what was in front of me. I mean come on, it was really good. Gorey and well written.
Well, I hope you update soon though I see you haven't... Anyway, please finish the story you have ever so graced us (me) with.
And so I wait... Hopefully not for long, I pray.
8/10/2011 c9 Vampirephantome
Dear god please update!
I'm fairly sure I'll die of withdrawals of you don't.
You don't want that do you? Your faithful reader to be struck needy and shaking?
Dear god please update!
I'm fairly sure I'll die of withdrawals of you don't.
You don't want that do you? Your faithful reader to be struck needy and shaking?
8/10/2011 c8 Vanpirephantome
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Jesus!
Rrrraaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!
Please continue this fabulous story. I'm more or less shitting my pants right now because I'm tripping bawls.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Jesus!
Rrrraaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!
Please continue this fabulous story. I'm more or less shitting my pants right now because I'm tripping bawls.
8/10/2011 c5 Vampirephabtome
This chapter was so beautifully, disgustingly graphic that I read it twice. I love it. 3
This chapter was so beautifully, disgustingly graphic that I read it twice. I love it. 3
8/10/2011 c2 Vampirephantome
:) I'm really enjoying this fanfic already. It's very well written and the characters are fabulously well developed without breaking the creators intentions. I love it. Please keep updating.
:) I'm really enjoying this fanfic already. It's very well written and the characters are fabulously well developed without breaking the creators intentions. I love it. Please keep updating.
6/18/2009 c9 Someone
Please make another chapter i want to read more
Please make another chapter i want to read more
5/1/2009 c9
6Zyber Elthone
I have to say, I've read your story, and compared to what I initially thought when reading the summary. Granted, I kinda saw the 'Beast eating someone' bit coming (I'd actually be a little mad if you didn't since I've come to expect it with these kind of fics) but you pulled off the fixed bit a lot different than what I'm used to seeing, or thinking. The split perspective also threw me at first, since I didn't catch on right away. BB wasthe grass and Beast was the rock, right?
And now Raven's worst nightmare (at least when she was younger) has come true. BB is in her head.
I also found it funny when you had her doing the deep probe and had her probe strike down near her, since they are in BB's head.

I have to say, I've read your story, and compared to what I initially thought when reading the summary. Granted, I kinda saw the 'Beast eating someone' bit coming (I'd actually be a little mad if you didn't since I've come to expect it with these kind of fics) but you pulled off the fixed bit a lot different than what I'm used to seeing, or thinking. The split perspective also threw me at first, since I didn't catch on right away. BB wasthe grass and Beast was the rock, right?
And now Raven's worst nightmare (at least when she was younger) has come true. BB is in her head.
I also found it funny when you had her doing the deep probe and had her probe strike down near her, since they are in BB's head.
5/5/2008 c8
17Toriano.Flacko
plus, that Whatever dude (he reviewed for you) has no **cking idea what the hell he was talkin about. You get dumb**cks like that all the time, whoever you are. they also decide to piss you off while they tell you to 'grow up retard'. WHAT the hell did he mean this story wasn't original? I hate jack*sses like that, they mouth off an don even give you a genuine Pen Name to track them down an kill em at. Geez.

plus, that Whatever dude (he reviewed for you) has no **cking idea what the hell he was talkin about. You get dumb**cks like that all the time, whoever you are. they also decide to piss you off while they tell you to 'grow up retard'. WHAT the hell did he mean this story wasn't original? I hate jack*sses like that, they mouth off an don even give you a genuine Pen Name to track them down an kill em at. Geez.