
4/16/2007 c2 Tamerlane
Goodness that was an evil cliffhanger to leave it on. I am looking forward to the next chapter. You are a good writer and I like how the plot is moving so far, lots of mystery and the you have captured the characters well. *adds to favorites list* ^_^
Goodness that was an evil cliffhanger to leave it on. I am looking forward to the next chapter. You are a good writer and I like how the plot is moving so far, lots of mystery and the you have captured the characters well. *adds to favorites list* ^_^
4/16/2007 c2 Espavo
Well, you might not know where you're going with this, but I'm in for the ride! I look forward to more!
Well, you might not know where you're going with this, but I'm in for the ride! I look forward to more!
4/16/2007 c1 Jess
Ouch...the foreigner air? Per si? (now that cracked me up once I realised what term you were actually after!) "sleep evading his bed as a twelve century virgin on her wedding night" Twelve century? Even if you had the right word that is such an awful attempt at interesting language. The story itself could be worse (although not good) but the language and writing style are awful.
Ouch...the foreigner air? Per si? (now that cracked me up once I realised what term you were actually after!) "sleep evading his bed as a twelve century virgin on her wedding night" Twelve century? Even if you had the right word that is such an awful attempt at interesting language. The story itself could be worse (although not good) but the language and writing style are awful.