for Cast between Worlds9/7 c17 Prime808
So I looked at the update date and I'm quite sad looks like this story is completely dead hasn't been updated in over a decade very sad so much potential the story was very good I would have been very interested to see what would have happened next
So I looked at the update date and I'm quite sad looks like this story is completely dead hasn't been updated in over a decade very sad so much potential the story was very good I would have been very interested to see what would have happened next
3/26 c1 GregMedve
I don't really know, how this site works yet, just wanted to say, this is my favourite HP crossover as of date. I already read all the chapters, and definitely bookmarked among those stories, I will reread. Probably more than once. Harry as airforce is very fitting. Also John and Harry are so sweet together, wanna hug them. :D Hope to find some more of its kind, somehow I always found some quite rare ships that I longing for.
I don't really know, how this site works yet, just wanted to say, this is my favourite HP crossover as of date. I already read all the chapters, and definitely bookmarked among those stories, I will reread. Probably more than once. Harry as airforce is very fitting. Also John and Harry are so sweet together, wanna hug them. :D Hope to find some more of its kind, somehow I always found some quite rare ships that I longing for.
1/5/2023 c17 
1Jimbocous
Thanks for a great read so far. Sure hope you find your way back to this at some point.
1JimbocousThanks for a great read so far. Sure hope you find your way back to this at some point.
7/23/2021 c17 Sleepygirl68
I like this story. I hope the author can get back to completing it.
Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.
I like this story. I hope the author can get back to completing it.
Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.
11/14/2020 c17 2Avalon Callahan
Well, it's been years and I don't even know if you are still active on this website but let me say this was amazing to read! I don't a single thing about US military but it was so great how you detailed everything. I really love your Harry and his relationship with Sheppard (I was reading the previous comments and woah, didn't know there were that much homophobes back then lol). It was fascinating to read, really!
2Avalon CallahanWell, it's been years and I don't even know if you are still active on this website but let me say this was amazing to read! I don't a single thing about US military but it was so great how you detailed everything. I really love your Harry and his relationship with Sheppard (I was reading the previous comments and woah, didn't know there were that much homophobes back then lol). It was fascinating to read, really!
5/28/2020 c1 1NewtonianLaw134
Your story would be so much better if you put an hour into military regulation and protocols, and understand that they would not send a cadet... correction a STUDENT into a combat situation. So this is painful to read as well as an incredibly inaccurate portrayal of any of the armed forces, and since you said he was part of the AIRFORCE he would not even be recommended for combat OP, and while yes StarGate portrays an Airforce major on the ground fighting, you also need to understand that is a fantasy world, and they are also in another universe with limited manpower and resources, so in those circumstances, yes I could see it happening, as they would need every available combat personnel to have a gun (also wasn't Shepard only on that mission because he was like one of the Ancients or something, it has been a while since I watched the show so I am forgetting why he was even on the mission in the first place, but it was defiantly not to be on the ground shooting a gun in the first place)
1NewtonianLaw134Your story would be so much better if you put an hour into military regulation and protocols, and understand that they would not send a cadet... correction a STUDENT into a combat situation. So this is painful to read as well as an incredibly inaccurate portrayal of any of the armed forces, and since you said he was part of the AIRFORCE he would not even be recommended for combat OP, and while yes StarGate portrays an Airforce major on the ground fighting, you also need to understand that is a fantasy world, and they are also in another universe with limited manpower and resources, so in those circumstances, yes I could see it happening, as they would need every available combat personnel to have a gun (also wasn't Shepard only on that mission because he was like one of the Ancients or something, it has been a while since I watched the show so I am forgetting why he was even on the mission in the first place, but it was defiantly not to be on the ground shooting a gun in the first place)
5/12/2019 c1 ROBERT-19588
before Harry left the Wizarding World, I hope you got everything but he hadn't Gringotts, as well as getting Dobby to come with him.
before Harry left the Wizarding World, I hope you got everything but he hadn't Gringotts, as well as getting Dobby to come with him.
10/10/2018 c2 scyfly
seriously learn some physics there is so much wrong with this it would take an epic lecture on even basic things to explain
seriously learn some physics there is so much wrong with this it would take an epic lecture on even basic things to explain
9/27/2018 c8 1teenwriter827
While not bad at all the fact that you have chosen to portray a gay Harry is rather interest ending. Making a clearly non homosexual character be gay is just stupid. Dumbledore was gay. If you wanted a gay character should have used him
1teenwriter827While not bad at all the fact that you have chosen to portray a gay Harry is rather interest ending. Making a clearly non homosexual character be gay is just stupid. Dumbledore was gay. If you wanted a gay character should have used him