
4/18/2007 c1
3AllThatGlittersIsGold
Oh, angsty! My oh my, that was really deep,and really emotional.
Great writing. I really liked his little ficlet, and I actually wouldn't mind seeing it turn into more!
xx

Oh, angsty! My oh my, that was really deep,and really emotional.
Great writing. I really liked his little ficlet, and I actually wouldn't mind seeing it turn into more!
xx
4/18/2007 c1 Jaby
Oh, how I would love the series to continue like this!
I especially like this line They speak in lies, sealed in kisses.
Very poetic.
Oh, how I would love the series to continue like this!
I especially like this line They speak in lies, sealed in kisses.
Very poetic.
4/18/2007 c1
26IvoryAlchemist
Really nice. One nitpick: You use the words "lies" about four times in last few sentances. But otherwise fantastic! Good job.

Really nice. One nitpick: You use the words "lies" about four times in last few sentances. But otherwise fantastic! Good job.