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9/27/2007 c3 shel
very nice

you should update!

it's the holidays soon so you have no excuse!

except of course the yearly exams

but STUFF that

you should write

i see why you'll be a journalist in the future

then you can write things against george bush and john howard except hopefully they'll either not be in parliament anymore or dead

oh i'm evil
7/17/2007 c3 crzy95
um i really liked it but can you write more plz coz its really gud
7/16/2007 c3 14AllisonSwan
i like it
7/16/2007 c1 gbv
zv
7/16/2007 c3 16Patience.Virtue.Is
Haha, that was pretty funny!

Please update soon!

~Amanda
5/13/2007 c1 roli tbh
wtf well you're MAKING me read this thing so uh

OK IT'S VERY GOOD

but i haven't even read it yet so whatever ok i'll ~quote~ while i read it

SOME NICE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM B)

“I’LL THANK YOU NOT TO USE THAT LANGUAGE IN MY OFFICE MR BLACK!” McGonagall yelled.

wtf um dude no

“This is terrible.”

FAKNFIOMNFOAFNAON SRSLY

Danice was a muggle-born computer- holic with loose curls of shoulder length dark hair and oval shaped glasses. Danice was what, in the muggle-world, might be described as ‘Emo’, or at least, that was the image of herself she liked to give people.

you know what

NO

“James! No offence mate, but Remmy’s right,” Sirius said, pulling him back.

Remus snorted incredulously. “Remmy?” he said in disbelief.

THEY'RE TOTALLY DATING

“Although, as with all your other unattractive qualities, it is more than made up for in your stunningly handsome looks, am I right?” said Remus, suppressing a smile.

TOTALLY DATING

Even Lily Evans was hard put to escape the warm peat bog of James Potter’s lush hazel eyes.

omg i just spat hot chocolate everywhere so uh

“What’s this I hear about you being banned from the next match?” she demanded, staring angrily up into his face (she was at least a head shorter than him).

omg why does THAT seem familiar

You- you SELF CENTRED BUSH PIG!

wtf you kinda need new insults dude

“You will regret this, Potter,” he said in a deathly quiet voice, so nobody else could hear.

OH

ok done

anyway

uh

yeah

ok

ok

v good

and nice

and stuff

ok

ok

ok

bye
5/3/2007 c1 chimelle
nice :D is denice based on deni or something... just thinking. and lol emily hayward!

very nice job sal
4/29/2007 c2 1die-for-a-dream
YAY!

funfunfunfunfunfunfunfun

P.S. is arm-count an expression or did you get that from me counting your blonde moments on my arm?
4/29/2007 c2 Nicole
You're very good. I really like the way you've presented the whole LilyJames thing. And it flows really well. Update soon, if you please.
4/28/2007 c1 sally
hello sally. this is sally reviewing my own story, like the wacko that i am!

:D :D :D :D :D
4/24/2007 c1 die-for-a-dream
you ROCK!

hahahahahahahai found it

mwahahahahaa

that scream was quite long.

now for people reading this... KEEP READING! BESTEST STORY EVER! very awsome!

:) and review or ill cut myself.! thats right. telling the truth, here.

she has a new fone and is happy. thought i might just throw it in.

COOL STORY!
4/18/2007 c1 16Patience.Virtue.Is
Haha, that was really funny!

So far this sounds really promising!

Good chapter!

Can't wait for the next one!

Please update soon!

Mischief Managed,

Amanda

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