7/30/2011 c19 3Vulcan Rider
Dearest Erin,

I'm so very glad you decided to get back to this story. I know it was dropped for a long time. Real life gets that way sometimes, but even with your young age, the premise of this story is a good one, with so many different facets of each relationship. I hope you decide to finish it. Whether it is for reviews, or just for the pride of knowing that you completed something you started at such a young age, and as you mature, so has your writing.

The interesting part is whether this is a government project she was involved in accidentally, or what? Maybe the old guy with Mike is someone in the military that Ranger even knew, that was a rogue. Hmmn. Lots of potential there. I hope Jade and Leo take some time and wait until they are a little older to explore their sexuality more, especially since they were thrown into such an intense relationship, due to the danger of the situation.

I'm glad Lester was able to settle things with Jade, and get their relationship back on a trusting friendship. I, too, was wondering if he was beginning to feel a bit inappropriate about her, but you managed that situation very well.

I know you may have lost some readers, due to the length of time that has gone by during your hiatus from writing, but many will occasionally check by over their stories that have been set aside, like myself, from time to time. I was going through my alerts, clearing my lists, and happened to notice this was updated and was very excited. I hope you complete it, and answer all the questions, and give us a good wrap up to the threat. Maybe a closer relationship between Steph and Jade.

Anyway, thanks so much for updating this, even though it took me several months to realize it. I'm glad you are still sharing your work with us.

Love ya,

Maggie

10/20/2010 c10 Mik N'jirnav
I'm enjoying the story. There is one thing which is troubling me...I'm having trouble following just which person's POV we are in sometimes. When you don't give us a clue (like a heading announcing whose POV it is) then I can't always figure out whose POV it is.

10/20/2010 c4 Mik N'jirnav
Tested on and possibly upgraded? OMG!

10/10/2010 c11 2Emilie Martel and RE Nobert
Who is Cara?

10/2/2009 c18 TexanBabe
I just found this story. It's amazing. Lots of twists and turns. I'm sure there is some reason you stopped writing this, but would you pleze consider finishing it? Your ideas at the end of ch. 18 are intriguing and I really want to know what happened to Jade...was it aliens? or an evil scientist? Anyway, think about it. It's a really good story. Pam

7/6/2008 c18 2Rushingriver
Good chapter! This is really interesting I cant wait to find out weather she actually becomes a good swimmer or not! Update soon!

~Rushingriver

6/21/2008 c1 1dancingpiggy
i like it, can'r wait to see more of them bonding

dancingpiggy