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1/14/2014 c1 29CatLover444
Very Sweet!
8/10/2008 c1 Pyromaniac
like how you worked clockwork into the story. Very nice, clockwork is one of the cooler ghosts. Nice fic, very cute very sweet.
5/11/2007 c1 simple i'm the best
The last part about Clockwork was what got me to review.

But all in all, this is great... have no idea what the song is, but still, I have to say, you're good at this.

Although, the thought of Danny singing... made me grin. Really widely.

Great work!
4/27/2007 c1 9hopewithfeathers
I loved it! One question through...What was with Clockwork saying perfect? I mean, it was just kinda thrown in there. Very good through! :D
4/26/2007 c1 omgmyyouth
Yes very perfect.

AWESOME STORY!
4/22/2007 c1 15Kpfan72491
great story
4/20/2007 c1 3ShieldMaid4JC
Wow! Great Job! I Love this song!
4/20/2007 c1 44TexasDreamer01
i liked it, but you need to clean up a few details and make it a tad bit easier to read.

as one of my reviewers said "don't just dump a whole bunch of dialogue in there".

otherwise, i enjoyed reading it,

brittney

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