7/3/2019 c11 DragonTamer01
WHAT?! What the FUCK kind of ending is this?! FUCK YOU! Fuck you for this bullshit ending! Why couldn’t you make Harry be SELFISH for once in his miserable life and BE WITH HERMIONE?!
I’m never reading anything you write ever again.
WHAT?! What the FUCK kind of ending is this?! FUCK YOU! Fuck you for this bullshit ending! Why couldn’t you make Harry be SELFISH for once in his miserable life and BE WITH HERMIONE?!
I’m never reading anything you write ever again.
10/18/2012 c11 PeterAmaranth09
you could of put a warning this wasnt a harry/hermione i feel realy sick :S
you could of put a warning this wasnt a harry/hermione i feel realy sick :S
9/9/2009 c11 Chaz
Sorry, for me this story was somewhat disjointed. I also have to agree with a couple of other readers in that this was just a Charlie/Hermione fic with Harry sort of pushed in there. If you're going to list a story as HHR, please let it be that way.
Sorry, for me this story was somewhat disjointed. I also have to agree with a couple of other readers in that this was just a Charlie/Hermione fic with Harry sort of pushed in there. If you're going to list a story as HHR, please let it be that way.
4/29/2009 c11 lily
thats was a terrible ending she should have been with harry it was great what he did with charlie but he broke her heart
thats was a terrible ending she should have been with harry it was great what he did with charlie but he broke her heart
9/16/2007 c11 12worldsapart
I'm very, very confused. You write well, but this story made very little sense. I don't understand WHY Harry and the others joined this secret school. It's very out of character for them to all abandon their family and friends that way. Also, for a story marked as "Romance" and "Harry & Hermione," this certainly had a bittersweet, angsty ending. I persevered through to the end, but now I wish I hadn't. That was a lot of intense stuff to slog through for very little payoff in the end. Again, you write well, but it really all comes down to the plot hook making no sense whatsoever.
I'm very, very confused. You write well, but this story made very little sense. I don't understand WHY Harry and the others joined this secret school. It's very out of character for them to all abandon their family and friends that way. Also, for a story marked as "Romance" and "Harry & Hermione," this certainly had a bittersweet, angsty ending. I persevered through to the end, but now I wish I hadn't. That was a lot of intense stuff to slog through for very little payoff in the end. Again, you write well, but it really all comes down to the plot hook making no sense whatsoever.
8/18/2007 c11 The Potters are cool
hi
i am really weird i always review the last one but the others as well! i think is my favioute yet it is really good you should do more like these! it made me cry in some places which is hard for storys to do that to me!
from
the reader
ps: keep going! :)
hi
i am really weird i always review the last one but the others as well! i think is my favioute yet it is really good you should do more like these! it made me cry in some places which is hard for storys to do that to me!
from
the reader
ps: keep going! :)
8/17/2007 c11 Miriam
Wow. That was amazing... It almost made me cry! Very well done :D
Wow. That was amazing... It almost made me cry! Very well done :D
8/17/2007 c11 hahahaha ur ugly
lol this story was lame and so was the ending what the hell was the story about except a charlie hermione story that you tried to force become a h/hr story, seriously i think you thought you were being original by making it charlie/hermione but you failed please leave.
lol this story was lame and so was the ending what the hell was the story about except a charlie hermione story that you tried to force become a h/hr story, seriously i think you thought you were being original by making it charlie/hermione but you failed please leave.
8/11/2007 c10 sam
YOUR NUMBER ONE REVIEWER IS BACK! hey! i am so glad you are back it was a long time i thought you gave up! i know the next is the last chapter! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Tell me you are going to write another story! PLEASE!
YOUR NUMBER ONE REVIEWER IS BACK! hey! i am so glad you are back it was a long time i thought you gave up! i know the next is the last chapter! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Tell me you are going to write another story! PLEASE!
8/8/2007 c4 9Lemur76
P.S. I love the fact that you are using a new song for each chapter. I like hearing new music.
P.S. I love the fact that you are using a new song for each chapter. I like hearing new music.
8/8/2007 c3 Lemur76
Fun story! I like all the action that is taking place. It's also a unique plot for a Harry Potter fanfic, which I appreciate. I believe that I read that English is not your first language, so I really think you are doing a fabulous job! The only critique I would have is that you are jumping around in your verb tense a little bit. I'm going to continue reading now!
Fun story! I like all the action that is taking place. It's also a unique plot for a Harry Potter fanfic, which I appreciate. I believe that I read that English is not your first language, so I really think you are doing a fabulous job! The only critique I would have is that you are jumping around in your verb tense a little bit. I'm going to continue reading now!
7/16/2007 c9 sam
omg you havent updated in a while! do you have writers block? or are you just busy? i understand being your number one most loyal reader! i am waiting for a new chapter!
omg you havent updated in a while! do you have writers block? or are you just busy? i understand being your number one most loyal reader! i am waiting for a new chapter!
7/5/2007 c9 sam
i understand! it fine. i like this chapter it great keep writing!
i understand! it fine. i like this chapter it great keep writing!
6/28/2007 c8 20ProperT
Just started reading, and I like this. You know at the moment I'm really not feeling Supernus... he seems to be a jerk. Anyhoo, enjoying the story, hope Harry and Hermione get it together, and... I can't believe I'm saying this, but I hope everything works out with Ron and Pansy... I dislike Pansy, in case you couldn't tell, lol. :)
Just started reading, and I like this. You know at the moment I'm really not feeling Supernus... he seems to be a jerk. Anyhoo, enjoying the story, hope Harry and Hermione get it together, and... I can't believe I'm saying this, but I hope everything works out with Ron and Pansy... I dislike Pansy, in case you couldn't tell, lol. :)