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9/6/2007 c1 1LittleMissPadfoot
Ok I officially love you!

Alucard was sweet, not out of character sweet (thank god) but sweet none the less!..I'll stop saying sweet now. ^.^

I honest to god, jumped up and squealed at this..I haven't done that for a long time.

"Do you realy want a monster in your bed?"

"I see no monster."

"I see a man, a king, and a master."

Keep up the good work

L.M.P xx
9/4/2007 c1 4Anonymous Psychofan
Such a perfect little oneshot! XD So cute!

I loved Seras' sleep talk. Pillow, sleepy. Alucard soft.

Awesome job- I hope you write another Hellsing fic soon!
4/25/2007 c1 14Revan's split personality
Well, it's nice to know that you're at least trying. You said you wanted people to mention words that are spelled wrong, and I am here to deliver (could be a bit of a long list, but I don't have much else to do). :P

-Not a spelling error, but a comment. Make sure that when you start a new sentence you capitalize the first word.

- collapsed has a double 'l' - responce= response

- exsusted= exhausted - lisson= listen

- wined= whined - visabule= visible

- raing= rang - moned= moaned

- appered= appeared - grabed= grabbed

- quicly= quickly - agenst= against

- confortabule= comfortable - unawere= unaware

- speeking= speaking - realy= really

- desided= decided - pleedingly= pleadingly

- emoshonless= emotionless - snaped= snapped

- reched= reached

I think that's about all of them. ;)

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