for Lethal5/2/2007 c6 
5brwneyedgrl
Now now dont get down on yourself. we all think our writing is bad, but yours is really good. the one thing i would suggest you could work on is you switch your pronouns between me and she. other then that doing fabutabulus. oh and please tell me that bella will not kill edward she is going to protect them right right right Right. well update soon cause your story is one of my favorites
5brwneyedgrlNow now dont get down on yourself. we all think our writing is bad, but yours is really good. the one thing i would suggest you could work on is you switch your pronouns between me and she. other then that doing fabutabulus. oh and please tell me that bella will not kill edward she is going to protect them right right right Right. well update soon cause your story is one of my favorites
5/2/2007 c6 4reader101
I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY. I WANT YOU TO WRITE MORE CHAPTERS. I REALLY DO. BUT YOU MAY NOT WANT TO SO I UNDERSTAND. BUT JUST SO YOU KNOW, I DO LIKE, ALOT.
4reader101I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY. I WANT YOU TO WRITE MORE CHAPTERS. I REALLY DO. BUT YOU MAY NOT WANT TO SO I UNDERSTAND. BUT JUST SO YOU KNOW, I DO LIKE, ALOT.
5/2/2007 c6 becca
wow
that was really good!
i started reading when ch5 was up and ive been checking every few hrs for the next chapter
will we find out what aro wants her to do in the next chapter?
wow
that was really good!
i started reading when ch5 was up and ive been checking every few hrs for the next chapter
will we find out what aro wants her to do in the next chapter?
5/2/2007 c6 angielikescupcakes
I keep wondering what the mission is? Maybe she's supposed to betray Edward in some way? If so why does she have to go all the way back to Italy? Maybe I read too fast? I have to go to work soon -; I'll re read it when I get back home and send another review~
I keep wondering what the mission is? Maybe she's supposed to betray Edward in some way? If so why does she have to go all the way back to Italy? Maybe I read too fast? I have to go to work soon -; I'll re read it when I get back home and send another review~
5/2/2007 c6 schmexybella
she's gonna kill edward? *starts to hypervenilate* oh god no, please no, bella cant! lol it will be bxe though, right, right? right? *paranoia attack*
-schmexybella
8.7.07
she's gonna kill edward? *starts to hypervenilate* oh god no, please no, bella cant! lol it will be bxe though, right, right? right? *paranoia attack*
-schmexybella
8.7.07
5/2/2007 c6 1blissfulmemories
that was so good! i wonder wat bella has to do...does it have something to do with the cullens, edward, to be more specific? cant wait for the next chapter tho!
btw i love how edward wasnt the first vampire that bella came across, that she was already a vampire when they fall in love. an interesting beginning!
but i hope u make bellas powers more clearer tho, since shes the prefect vampire, she much have some kick ass powers, rite? (excuse my language ^_^)
1blissfulmemoriesthat was so good! i wonder wat bella has to do...does it have something to do with the cullens, edward, to be more specific? cant wait for the next chapter tho!
btw i love how edward wasnt the first vampire that bella came across, that she was already a vampire when they fall in love. an interesting beginning!
but i hope u make bellas powers more clearer tho, since shes the prefect vampire, she much have some kick ass powers, rite? (excuse my language ^_^)
5/2/2007 c6 1excitingem555
I thought is was great! there are a few grammatical errors, but who doesnt have those? i would like the chapters to be longer so i could read more:-D. pretty please!
1excitingem555I thought is was great! there are a few grammatical errors, but who doesnt have those? i would like the chapters to be longer so i could read more:-D. pretty please!
5/2/2007 c6 k9800
wow that was awsome! I can't wait to see the collins reactions when they find out that shes a vampire!
wow that was awsome! I can't wait to see the collins reactions when they find out that shes a vampire!
5/2/2007 c6 1smileon
I liked it. It's sweet how she wants to wait to tell him. I'm a little surprised by the ending though. She's so back and forth. Post more when you can :)
1smileonI liked it. It's sweet how she wants to wait to tell him. I'm a little surprised by the ending though. She's so back and forth. Post more when you can :)
5/1/2007 c5 3hot pink polka dot
your doing a great job n its one of my favorit stories iwas jus wondering if edward could still drink from bella because she still smell good to him?
3hot pink polka dotyour doing a great job n its one of my favorit stories iwas jus wondering if edward could still drink from bella because she still smell good to him?
5/1/2007 c5 1Kairiyin
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER YAY THEY ARE GETTING CLOSER^ ^ HOORAY. I think that Edward is going to find out Bella's secert
1KairiyinI LOVE THIS CHAPTER YAY THEY ARE GETTING CLOSER^ ^ HOORAY. I think that Edward is going to find out Bella's secert
5/1/2007 c5 50Titled Heart
Hm...it's getting pretty good now, but you probably will want to proofread a bit more before you post. It gets confusing when the words are mixed up...and I'm the type of person that will sit there for an hour trying to figure out exactly what you were trying to say...heh...good job, though. Can't wait for the next update.
Artee
50Titled HeartHm...it's getting pretty good now, but you probably will want to proofread a bit more before you post. It gets confusing when the words are mixed up...and I'm the type of person that will sit there for an hour trying to figure out exactly what you were trying to say...heh...good job, though. Can't wait for the next update.
Artee
5/1/2007 c5 1Alyrenzia
i like how bella changes her mind, and decides on the cullens. nice. her decision to protect the cullens could get a little iffy. to protect them she has to reveal who and what she really is, and i would love to see the cullens' reaction. i think that's what's going to happen next, along with a suprise visit from the volturi. i love your story, it's so awesome
1Alyrenziai like how bella changes her mind, and decides on the cullens. nice. her decision to protect the cullens could get a little iffy. to protect them she has to reveal who and what she really is, and i would love to see the cullens' reaction. i think that's what's going to happen next, along with a suprise visit from the volturi. i love your story, it's so awesome
4/30/2007 c5 3ouiplanete
I LIKE IT! what happens next? when does edward discover that she is a vampire too?
3ouiplaneteI LIKE IT! what happens next? when does edward discover that she is a vampire too?