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4/24/2007 c2 5brwneyedgrl
loved this chapter just as much as the last one so please continue on as soon as possiable. you really are a good writer.
4/24/2007 c2 5SmilinSmiles
LOVE the new chapter :)
4/24/2007 c2 1exact brand of heroin
okay this is really good so far. i have one tiny correction for you, it's Aro, Marcus and Caius. sorry that just really bothered me, but your story is really good. Update soon please. ^^
4/24/2007 c1 5SmilinSmiles
Ha, I love it I cant wait till you update..
4/24/2007 c2 olivia
it's not bad, definately an interesting concept

but check spelling and grammar ((such as to, too, and two))

and try to be consistent i mean if she's a vampire..she def would not have blood or be able to blush
4/24/2007 c2 Kasai13
I like this story it sounds very interesting. I hope you keep going with it.
4/24/2007 c2 1smileon
This seems good so far. And with Bella's personality I can only imagine what's to come with Edward and everyone haha. Definitely post more when you can :) :) :) :) :) :)
4/24/2007 c2 2Deliriously Withdrawn
good - few things though; it's Caius not Cassius and what happened to Markus? =]

-Cassie
4/24/2007 c1 50Titled Heart
Interesting so far. Can't wait to read more.

Artee
4/24/2007 c1 1Kairiyin
OH whats gunna happen?
4/23/2007 c1 5brwneyedgrl
Hey i really like it up date soon please. Quick question i know she can eat human food, but does she need blood. Your storie is really well writen so please oh please, one more time please up date soon
4/23/2007 c1 aconspiracytheory
oh.. sounds really interesting! I like it a lot... update soon please!
4/23/2007 c1 1Alyrenzia
easiest thing in her life? yeah like never gonna happen. i like the idea of the story, and the cliffie was excruciating, i so want more, i can't wait until she meets the cullens, or edward to be specific, update soon

QI
4/23/2007 c1 r0b0tic vampir
sounds interesting, please update soon.
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