4/24/2007 c2 5brwneyedgrl
loved this chapter just as much as the last one so please continue on as soon as possiable. you really are a good writer.

4/24/2007 c2 1exact brand of heroin
okay this is really good so far. i have one tiny correction for you, it's Aro, Marcus and Caius. sorry that just really bothered me, but your story is really good. Update soon please. ^^

4/24/2007 c2 olivia
it's not bad, definately an interesting concept

but check spelling and grammar ((such as to, too, and two))

and try to be consistent i mean if she's a vampire..she def would not have blood or be able to blush

4/24/2007 c2 1smileon
This seems good so far. And with Bella's personality I can only imagine what's to come with Edward and everyone haha. Definitely post more when you can :) :) :) :) :) :)

4/24/2007 c1 50Titled Heart
Interesting so far. Can't wait to read more.

Artee

4/23/2007 c1 5brwneyedgrl
Hey i really like it up date soon please. Quick question i know she can eat human food, but does she need blood. Your storie is really well writen so please oh please, one more time please up date soon

4/23/2007 c1 1Alyrenzia
easiest thing in her life? yeah like never gonna happen. i like the idea of the story, and the cliffie was excruciating, i so want more, i can't wait until she meets the cullens, or edward to be specific, update soon

QI