
7/24/2007 c12 Aleakim
I like the story. It's really good and different read a story when Bella is the dangerous one. Keep it coming! Now I'm going to see how are that suggestions of yours. Wish me luck.
I like the story. It's really good and different read a story when Bella is the dangerous one. Keep it coming! Now I'm going to see how are that suggestions of yours. Wish me luck.
7/18/2007 c12 Alex-Marie-1992
Hi. This is really good. I love it! Pleases update as soon as possible!
Hi. This is really good. I love it! Pleases update as soon as possible!
7/2/2007 c12
1FangedMoonEyes
ow!
GO Bella!
hehe. i loved the whole chapter.
Bella and Edward are so great together! Please Write more and soon. I love it! JUst love it. I was just wondering, What game were they playing?
please write another chapter and get back to me.
Thank You.! ; )
MoonEyes

ow!
GO Bella!
hehe. i loved the whole chapter.
Bella and Edward are so great together! Please Write more and soon. I love it! JUst love it. I was just wondering, What game were they playing?
please write another chapter and get back to me.
Thank You.! ; )
MoonEyes
7/1/2007 c12
1excitingem555
hehehe! im going to Germany on July 10. i guess well all be away and ppl will form an angry mob and attack us for not updating! hm, i wonder if they need to borrow m pitchforks... lol yes i am the greatest reviewer eva! i dont even remember wat my advice was. i give alot of advice... i did like that chapter tho! ill have to peel at those stories that u mentioned but i havnt updated my own story in nearly a week and i cant get mobbed until after i get back from Germany! a well. i await the next chapter!

hehehe! im going to Germany on July 10. i guess well all be away and ppl will form an angry mob and attack us for not updating! hm, i wonder if they need to borrow m pitchforks... lol yes i am the greatest reviewer eva! i dont even remember wat my advice was. i give alot of advice... i did like that chapter tho! ill have to peel at those stories that u mentioned but i havnt updated my own story in nearly a week and i cant get mobbed until after i get back from Germany! a well. i await the next chapter!
6/30/2007 c12
7MusicDefinesUsAll
THANK YOU SO MUCH! YU ARE NICER THAN MOST PEOPLE THAT I KNOW! Sereiously, I'm not kidding! Most that know me don' think twice about this kind of thing!
This was an awesome chapter! I loved it! It was my favorite!
But I'm mad because you'll be in Hungary and I'll be camping on the 5th! Dang it! But I finished the next chapter of Timeles War! I just have to type it! I better go do that now...

THANK YOU SO MUCH! YU ARE NICER THAN MOST PEOPLE THAT I KNOW! Sereiously, I'm not kidding! Most that know me don' think twice about this kind of thing!
This was an awesome chapter! I loved it! It was my favorite!
But I'm mad because you'll be in Hungary and I'll be camping on the 5th! Dang it! But I finished the next chapter of Timeles War! I just have to type it! I better go do that now...
6/29/2007 c12 Transfiguration
well now, that was an awesome ending! Im so intrigued...I love Bella's hard to get/ cocky side with Jane! I can't wait for the plot...btw..wait to see what happens? does Edward have a secret?
well now, that was an awesome ending! Im so intrigued...I love Bella's hard to get/ cocky side with Jane! I can't wait for the plot...btw..wait to see what happens? does Edward have a secret?
6/29/2007 c12 LionHeart298
I really like that, and please put another chapter in before you leave! Please, i beg of you!
I really like that, and please put another chapter in before you leave! Please, i beg of you!
6/29/2007 c12 Danielle
I loved every word of it!
I loved every word of it!
6/29/2007 c12
4shattered-picture-frame
really good chapter. well-written and sweet. well except for the very end, but we can worry about that later...
UPDATE soon!e

really good chapter. well-written and sweet. well except for the very end, but we can worry about that later...
UPDATE soon!e
6/29/2007 c12
2wretched witch
LOL! Jane's a bitch! felix deserved what he got.
Plz, update soon!
Yours, gabby

LOL! Jane's a bitch! felix deserved what he got.
Plz, update soon!
Yours, gabby
6/28/2007 c4 Uncertian Destiny
pretty cool, question: will bella stay true to teh volturi or fall for edward? good story
pretty cool, question: will bella stay true to teh volturi or fall for edward? good story
6/28/2007 c6 colorsallaround
What is her mission?
your writing is amazing seriously this story is the best!
What is her mission?
your writing is amazing seriously this story is the best!