for Lethal6/28/2007 c12 
1smileon
Lovely update! In the beginning with the window seat on the airplane, too cute, and when Emmett said no one else will play with me, that was also adorable. I can't wait to see what Jane brings to the table. Have a great time in Hungary! Definitely post when you can when you get back. :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
1smileonLovely update! In the beginning with the window seat on the airplane, too cute, and when Emmett said no one else will play with me, that was also adorable. I can't wait to see what Jane brings to the table. Have a great time in Hungary! Definitely post when you can when you get back. :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
6/28/2007 c12 1blackirises
i love your story so much. its one of my favorites, and its all really creative. idk where you come up with this stuff, but i love it. i can't wait for jane to come into the picture.
1blackirisesi love your story so much. its one of my favorites, and its all really creative. idk where you come up with this stuff, but i love it. i can't wait for jane to come into the picture.
6/28/2007 c12 6SkyCullen
loved the chapter...I have relatives from Hungary as well...and from Spain, Puerto Rico, England, China, and Mexico...it's like so weird...lol...well please keep writing...I can't wait to read it...the ending was great...three cheers for Ditz4lyf...talk to you soon
6SkyCullenloved the chapter...I have relatives from Hungary as well...and from Spain, Puerto Rico, England, China, and Mexico...it's like so weird...lol...well please keep writing...I can't wait to read it...the ending was great...three cheers for Ditz4lyf...talk to you soon
6/22/2007 c11 1smileon
You're oh so welcome for always reviewing, haha. That's simply what happens when you write a great story. :)
Anywho, fan-freaking-tastic! This totally made up for the mini-break haha. Her fierceness with Felix gave me a little chill, and you described her movements perfectly. I could see it all playing out in my head like a mini-movie. It's nice that she now knows where her loyalty is for sure. I'm excited to see what's going to happen next. Post more when you can. :) :) :) :) :):)
1smileonYou're oh so welcome for always reviewing, haha. That's simply what happens when you write a great story. :)
Anywho, fan-freaking-tastic! This totally made up for the mini-break haha. Her fierceness with Felix gave me a little chill, and you described her movements perfectly. I could see it all playing out in my head like a mini-movie. It's nice that she now knows where her loyalty is for sure. I'm excited to see what's going to happen next. Post more when you can. :) :) :) :) :):)
6/22/2007 c11 10TablesTurned
This was a really good chapter..I loved it. I wish there was little more Edward in it though but what can I say I love Edward.haha. You have an amazing way of writting and this story is soo good. I love it! Hurry and update ASAP!
10TablesTurnedThis was a really good chapter..I loved it. I wish there was little more Edward in it though but what can I say I love Edward.haha. You have an amazing way of writting and this story is soo good. I love it! Hurry and update ASAP!
6/22/2007 c11 1FangedMoonEyes
oh my god, yes i enjoyed it! i lvoe it. it was great, awesome,amazing. every word, every line, every chapter i absorb.
i love your story.
Mooneyes.
; )
i cant wait for the update.
1FangedMoonEyesoh my god, yes i enjoyed it! i lvoe it. it was great, awesome,amazing. every word, every line, every chapter i absorb.
i love your story.
Mooneyes.
; )
i cant wait for the update.
6/22/2007 c11 1blackirises
that chapter was TOTALLY worth the wait! I loved it, and it was nice and long...which is always wonderful.
I really liked the way you described what it was like for her when her senses took over, and of course sweet moments between edward and bella are always WONDERFUL! yay! now im happy. I can't wait for you to update. i know more trouble's sure to come, but i really can't predict what adzactly you're going to do...something with the volturi.
UPDATE
~poe
1blackirisesthat chapter was TOTALLY worth the wait! I loved it, and it was nice and long...which is always wonderful.
I really liked the way you described what it was like for her when her senses took over, and of course sweet moments between edward and bella are always WONDERFUL! yay! now im happy. I can't wait for you to update. i know more trouble's sure to come, but i really can't predict what adzactly you're going to do...something with the volturi.
UPDATE
~poe
6/20/2007 c11 1excitingem555
WAHAHAHAHA! MY EVIL REVIEWS R SO EVIL AND AWESOME THEY HAVE RECIEVED RECOGNITION! lol thx i feel special and loved ;D. I liked how Bella was still able to mostly control her senses. Maybe she could have some flashbacks to her time in Volterra? idk just a suggestion. WOOSH! WOSH! WOSH!
SHUN the non believer! lol that just kinda popped out. sry.
1excitingem555WAHAHAHAHA! MY EVIL REVIEWS R SO EVIL AND AWESOME THEY HAVE RECIEVED RECOGNITION! lol thx i feel special and loved ;D. I liked how Bella was still able to mostly control her senses. Maybe she could have some flashbacks to her time in Volterra? idk just a suggestion. WOOSH! WOSH! WOSH!
SHUN the non believer! lol that just kinda popped out. sry.
6/20/2007 c11 2wretched witch
YUHUU! Edward and Bella; kiss; Felix dead; you write more!
Plz, update soon!
Yours, gabby
2wretched witchYUHUU! Edward and Bella; kiss; Felix dead; you write more!
Plz, update soon!
Yours, gabby
6/19/2007 c11 Transfiguration
WOW! you out did yourself this time. That was amazing to see Bella's anger and instincts take over! I love the the part about Edward's raspy voice...you are weaving those intimate details in very smoothly! WOW! I am so excited! I am wondering...did Edward let Bella kill Felix? He knew she would be mad did he not care to hurry to follow her...that's kind of un-edward right? well, maybe not because she has been a self-sustaining vampire without him for a while... NICE JOB!
WOW! you out did yourself this time. That was amazing to see Bella's anger and instincts take over! I love the the part about Edward's raspy voice...you are weaving those intimate details in very smoothly! WOW! I am so excited! I am wondering...did Edward let Bella kill Felix? He knew she would be mad did he not care to hurry to follow her...that's kind of un-edward right? well, maybe not because she has been a self-sustaining vampire without him for a while... NICE JOB!
6/19/2007 c11 6SkyCullen
loved your chapter...and your totally welcome...thank you for allowing me to help you...I would be glad to help you again and thank you for helping me with my next story...I'm going to post it when the other is done...and don't worry...there's going to be some punishment for Edward, Jessica, and Mike...
"Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" -Oscar Hammerstein II, Cinderalla
"Gravitation can not be held responsible for people falling in love." -Albert Einstein
6SkyCullenloved your chapter...and your totally welcome...thank you for allowing me to help you...I would be glad to help you again and thank you for helping me with my next story...I'm going to post it when the other is done...and don't worry...there's going to be some punishment for Edward, Jessica, and Mike...
"Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" -Oscar Hammerstein II, Cinderalla
"Gravitation can not be held responsible for people falling in love." -Albert Einstein
6/19/2007 c11 emloveslit
this was a very well written chapter and i'm glad that you had bella's feelings cleared up somewhat so that she could make a clear decision about what she was going to do. also i'm glad that you got rid of felix because i have never liked him though i do look forward to another chapter and finding out who from the volturi comes after them next! so update soon!
this was a very well written chapter and i'm glad that you had bella's feelings cleared up somewhat so that she could make a clear decision about what she was going to do. also i'm glad that you got rid of felix because i have never liked him though i do look forward to another chapter and finding out who from the volturi comes after them next! so update soon!