for Cornelia’s Jealous and the Punishment of Candracar1/17/2016 c1 Anonimus
WTF is wrong whit cornelia but still caleb knowing what happend and that it was his fault kissing will is not your thing in my opinion i prefer the animation from reading thank you. dont hate cornelia but do hate CALEB!
WTF is wrong whit cornelia but still caleb knowing what happend and that it was his fault kissing will is not your thing in my opinion i prefer the animation from reading thank you. dont hate cornelia but do hate CALEB!
4/29/2011 c1 acerbicdrunk
BLEH! THIS IS ONE OF THE YUCKIEST THINGS I'VE EVER SEEN! AND YOU NEED A BETA! Why on earth do people like pairing people that don't have any romantic connection and so make no sense to me?
BLEH! THIS IS ONE OF THE YUCKIEST THINGS I'VE EVER SEEN! AND YOU NEED A BETA! Why on earth do people like pairing people that don't have any romantic connection and so make no sense to me?
11/23/2009 c1 
90Lexvan
Wow! Just wow! You made Cornelia a little carazy didn't you? Mind if I use some of this story for a story I'm thinking of?
90LexvanWow! Just wow! You made Cornelia a little carazy didn't you? Mind if I use some of this story for a story I'm thinking of?
8/27/2009 c1 1DandelionGirl
Well, you made it quite clear in the title what this fic was all about.
Normally, I support CxC (it's a childhood inclination, really, considering that I read the comics first before the series). But, WxC is nice too, I guess.
Wow, you weren't kidding when you said that this had Corny-bashing in it. lol. But please remember that this is fanfiction and that the respective characters belong to someone else, so handle them wisely.
This is *not* a flame. I repeat. This is *not* a flame, but think of this as advice from one author to another. :)
Anyways, this fic is nicely done, with the exception of a few spelling errors, like:
"With the exception of Yan Lin who looked furriers the rest were looking confused at their surroundings."
"Furriers?" you mean furious?
Anyways, this ascerbic fic made me laugh, so thanks for that. :)
1DandelionGirlWell, you made it quite clear in the title what this fic was all about.
Normally, I support CxC (it's a childhood inclination, really, considering that I read the comics first before the series). But, WxC is nice too, I guess.
Wow, you weren't kidding when you said that this had Corny-bashing in it. lol. But please remember that this is fanfiction and that the respective characters belong to someone else, so handle them wisely.
This is *not* a flame. I repeat. This is *not* a flame, but think of this as advice from one author to another. :)
Anyways, this fic is nicely done, with the exception of a few spelling errors, like:
"With the exception of Yan Lin who looked furriers the rest were looking confused at their surroundings."
"Furriers?" you mean furious?
Anyways, this ascerbic fic made me laugh, so thanks for that. :)
10/17/2008 c1 The Spiked Dragon
Great story it rocked, I'm a Will x Caleb fan as well as a Will x Phobos fan too.
Great story it rocked, I'm a Will x Caleb fan as well as a Will x Phobos fan too.
8/19/2008 c1 30Cassidy S. Waters
Hey there XV-Dragon. Man, I feel your pain with flaming. I'm personally a CxC fan(mainly because I'd like to see Will with Matt or Cole, you know who, and I've never really cared that much for Caleb) but I don't understand the reason to flame a story because of a pairing. It's not like it's a matter of life or death. But, personally, please don't bash Cornelia. Even though she's my least favorite guardian of the group, I hate seeing Cornelia, Taranee, HayLin, Irma, or Willbashing of any sort. But you have all the right to be angry.
My suggestion? Draw the flamers with their heads stuck in a toaster. That always cheers me up. That, or ask my cyber buddies to post embarrassing things about the flamers.
Anyway, keep writing my friend! You're doin' swell!
30Cassidy S. WatersHey there XV-Dragon. Man, I feel your pain with flaming. I'm personally a CxC fan(mainly because I'd like to see Will with Matt or Cole, you know who, and I've never really cared that much for Caleb) but I don't understand the reason to flame a story because of a pairing. It's not like it's a matter of life or death. But, personally, please don't bash Cornelia. Even though she's my least favorite guardian of the group, I hate seeing Cornelia, Taranee, HayLin, Irma, or Willbashing of any sort. But you have all the right to be angry.
My suggestion? Draw the flamers with their heads stuck in a toaster. That always cheers me up. That, or ask my cyber buddies to post embarrassing things about the flamers.
Anyway, keep writing my friend! You're doin' swell!
5/15/2008 c1 5Hotgirlow
hey can you write more chapters on this please instead of it being a one-shot
5Hotgirlowhey can you write more chapters on this please instead of it being a one-shot
4/25/2008 c1 28Karon19
Man, I can tell this was one of your earliest works. It's nowhere near as developed as your current projects. You're missing several punctuation marks and...this is something I finally noticed, you keep using the word "ya". You still use them and at first I thought it was slang, but I think the word you're looking for is "Yeah." Ya makes them sound German.
On the plus side, I see another writer has taken an interst in your story and created a sequel. You've created quite a loyal fanbase.
Knight
28Karon19Man, I can tell this was one of your earliest works. It's nowhere near as developed as your current projects. You're missing several punctuation marks and...this is something I finally noticed, you keep using the word "ya". You still use them and at first I thought it was slang, but I think the word you're looking for is "Yeah." Ya makes them sound German.
On the plus side, I see another writer has taken an interst in your story and created a sequel. You've created quite a loyal fanbase.
Knight
4/24/2008 c1 JanessaVR
Ugh. Just garbage. I've seen you write better than this. This was just ridiculous OOC behavior (all around) as an excuse for a whole lot of Cornelia bashing.
Ugh. Just garbage. I've seen you write better than this. This was just ridiculous OOC behavior (all around) as an excuse for a whole lot of Cornelia bashing.
4/23/2008 c1 636yellow 14
Not as good as your other fanfics, especialy with Cornelia acting really out of character.I don't generally object to W.I.T.C.H pairings as the chances of them staying with the same people all the way to adulthood is pretty low.
636yellow 14Not as good as your other fanfics, especialy with Cornelia acting really out of character.I don't generally object to W.I.T.C.H pairings as the chances of them staying with the same people all the way to adulthood is pretty low.
11/26/2007 c1 Philip Gipson
I don't really blame you for rushing this story. The Will/Cornelia confrontation was very brutal. This tale takes place in the "W.I.T.C.H." cartoon universe. I dug it. I like how at the story's end a male like Caleb would become a Guardian of Candracar. His Guardian form was very well thought out. I recently got through reading some other "W.I.T.C.H." fanfics - "Tears of Meridian" by Heyvid21, "Dragon Sisters" by DBAinsw, "Malice in Wonderland" by Chocolate-latte, and "W.I.T.C.H. in the World of Avatar" by donki-shouben, which is an "Avatar: The Last Airbender" crossover. I also got through with donki's "More W.I.T.C.H. Adventures" series, a custom sequel to the "W.I.T.C.H. Adventures" books (I don't own those books, though I wish I could). They are all such great stories. The "W.I.T.C.H." franchise is very well preserved so long as there are websites and fanfics based upon it. Listen, my cousin bought me the 20th anniversary DVD of "Transformers: The Animated Movie." The universal greeting used by Autobots Kup and Hot Rod in the film is "Bah weep gragnah weep nini bong!" "Transformers" is a Hasbro toy brand adapted from Japan. Plus, I own the entire original cartoon on DVD. Do you think you can include the "universal greeting" in a future "W.I.T.C.H." story that has both fantasy and sci-fi?
I don't really blame you for rushing this story. The Will/Cornelia confrontation was very brutal. This tale takes place in the "W.I.T.C.H." cartoon universe. I dug it. I like how at the story's end a male like Caleb would become a Guardian of Candracar. His Guardian form was very well thought out. I recently got through reading some other "W.I.T.C.H." fanfics - "Tears of Meridian" by Heyvid21, "Dragon Sisters" by DBAinsw, "Malice in Wonderland" by Chocolate-latte, and "W.I.T.C.H. in the World of Avatar" by donki-shouben, which is an "Avatar: The Last Airbender" crossover. I also got through with donki's "More W.I.T.C.H. Adventures" series, a custom sequel to the "W.I.T.C.H. Adventures" books (I don't own those books, though I wish I could). They are all such great stories. The "W.I.T.C.H." franchise is very well preserved so long as there are websites and fanfics based upon it. Listen, my cousin bought me the 20th anniversary DVD of "Transformers: The Animated Movie." The universal greeting used by Autobots Kup and Hot Rod in the film is "Bah weep gragnah weep nini bong!" "Transformers" is a Hasbro toy brand adapted from Japan. Plus, I own the entire original cartoon on DVD. Do you think you can include the "universal greeting" in a future "W.I.T.C.H." story that has both fantasy and sci-fi?
10/11/2007 c1 2Ice Queen of Candracar
Damn, always that Corny was a bitch but damn. She doesn't deserve Caleb in canon much less this story, which by the way so totally rocked.
2Ice Queen of CandracarDamn, always that Corny was a bitch but damn. She doesn't deserve Caleb in canon much less this story, which by the way so totally rocked.
8/18/2007 c1 12Wilhelmina Vandom
I don't blame you for being upset over the bashing as I know some pairs I don't particularly like to begin with but after giving them a chance and reading several very well written stories I easily got to like the couples. (Not that I would have bashed them anyways, if someone likes a pairing thats cool, i ain't going to piss and moan about it) If others would just give some of these a chance they would most likely get to like them as well. And this story is ass kicking, I really loved it and wouldn't mind seeing a follow up with maybe a little bit of healing for Will and the others and see if maybe Cornelia can earn their forgiveness though she would never be a guardian again.
12Wilhelmina VandomI don't blame you for being upset over the bashing as I know some pairs I don't particularly like to begin with but after giving them a chance and reading several very well written stories I easily got to like the couples. (Not that I would have bashed them anyways, if someone likes a pairing thats cool, i ain't going to piss and moan about it) If others would just give some of these a chance they would most likely get to like them as well. And this story is ass kicking, I really loved it and wouldn't mind seeing a follow up with maybe a little bit of healing for Will and the others and see if maybe Cornelia can earn their forgiveness though she would never be a guardian again.