
4/4/2009 c25
17Phoenix Fanatic
What a great story! I've been following it for a while now, and I've been really impressed by the overall spelling, grammar, and general likeness of the characters. Any chance of a sequel?
I loved it!

What a great story! I've been following it for a while now, and I've been really impressed by the overall spelling, grammar, and general likeness of the characters. Any chance of a sequel?
I loved it!
11/23/2008 c25
204Lalaith Quetzalli
Is there gonna be a sequel or something? I mean, because it's been mentioned how the Volturi will want her and all. If not that's just fine with me.
I think this fic was pretty good, congrats.

Is there gonna be a sequel or something? I mean, because it's been mentioned how the Volturi will want her and all. If not that's just fine with me.
I think this fic was pretty good, congrats.
11/14/2008 c24
10esthermarie
hahahaha! now the rules weren't specific, but i'll bet that you'll end up reading this cuz you're hooked on ff reviews AND it's still on msn!
DAMN! I'm good! :D
love you! :D
and yes, i used up a review to win a burrito! deal! :D

hahahaha! now the rules weren't specific, but i'll bet that you'll end up reading this cuz you're hooked on ff reviews AND it's still on msn!
DAMN! I'm good! :D
love you! :D
and yes, i used up a review to win a burrito! deal! :D
10/25/2008 c25
1edwardandbellaforever25
hey :) loved the story and the wa you described bella's change into a vamp and the difficulties she faced! :D
~bel

hey :) loved the story and the wa you described bella's change into a vamp and the difficulties she faced! :D
~bel
8/18/2008 c25
1Nausika
Hi!
I just finished the whole story and I wanna say I loved it! It's just great!
Contratulations :)

Hi!
I just finished the whole story and I wanna say I loved it! It's just great!
Contratulations :)
3/30/2008 c25 Gwarpy
Everything about this story is wonderful! You can really write! Also LOVED the story! :]
Everything about this story is wonderful! You can really write! Also LOVED the story! :]
3/15/2008 c12
4Darkpebble13
Hey! I really like your story. I just wanted to let you know that you never told the readers what Mike wrote in Bella's yearbook. Of course, I could be mistaken and I could find out in another chapter, but I just wanted to tell you right now.
~Opalheart

Hey! I really like your story. I just wanted to let you know that you never told the readers what Mike wrote in Bella's yearbook. Of course, I could be mistaken and I could find out in another chapter, but I just wanted to tell you right now.
~Opalheart
1/27/2008 c25
3Ayva j Damas
aw! this story was SO wonderful! :)
I can't wait to see a sequel if you do it! (if you don't it's still perfectly fine!)
the only criticism is throughout you had a few spelling, and grammatical errors, but in all honesty, it was wonderful!
9.5/10

aw! this story was SO wonderful! :)
I can't wait to see a sequel if you do it! (if you don't it's still perfectly fine!)
the only criticism is throughout you had a few spelling, and grammatical errors, but in all honesty, it was wonderful!
9.5/10