
1/16/2010 c4
70Whirlwind421
Very cute! I would have liked to see more. It's an interesting concept. I like how he wrote Maxie into his phone! :)

Very cute! I would have liked to see more. It's an interesting concept. I like how he wrote Maxie into his phone! :)
8/9/2008 c4
14tylee17
damn, what happened to you that you never continued this?
probably just grew up or something, huh? well, with that kind of awesome writing style you sure did waste your talent on fanfic, but hey: I'd have loved to read more of this...
... for I never seem to grow up. Whatever the hell is the matter with me, huh? (:
anyways, great command of language; awesome.

damn, what happened to you that you never continued this?
probably just grew up or something, huh? well, with that kind of awesome writing style you sure did waste your talent on fanfic, but hey: I'd have loved to read more of this...
... for I never seem to grow up. Whatever the hell is the matter with me, huh? (:
anyways, great command of language; awesome.
6/10/2007 c4 megan
Love the story! Please update soon!
Love the story! Please update soon!
5/27/2007 c4 less than angel
Very interesting they now know each others names. But i have to say that i am more interested in what happened in that room and why they lost their memory in the first place.
Please update soon
Can't wait to read what happens next
:)
Very interesting they now know each others names. But i have to say that i am more interested in what happened in that room and why they lost their memory in the first place.
Please update soon
Can't wait to read what happens next
:)
5/27/2007 c4 aurora
aw he put her under "maxie"! that's too cute!
aw he put her under "maxie"! that's too cute!
5/26/2007 c4 acb
Great stuff so far!
Great stuff so far!
5/25/2007 c4
9Licensetocreep
hehe, of COURSE they dont, I mean what would EVER make them think...*looks around at scene*..oh wait...
haha
anyway, COS is coming along ok. Already over half way done. Just need to do a convo scene(short but vital and important) and then the rest is already penned, just need to be typed. THANK GOD! the end of its backed up...on paper!
ok, its late. excessively so. I'm gonna type out what I can, pray it doesn't suck, then pass out.

hehe, of COURSE they dont, I mean what would EVER make them think...*looks around at scene*..oh wait...
haha
anyway, COS is coming along ok. Already over half way done. Just need to do a convo scene(short but vital and important) and then the rest is already penned, just need to be typed. THANK GOD! the end of its backed up...on paper!
ok, its late. excessively so. I'm gonna type out what I can, pray it doesn't suck, then pass out.
5/25/2007 c4
12Mirajane Scarlet
I just read chapters 3 and 4, somehow I missed chapter 3 before. I like where this story is going, though. Very cool. And it's good they've found out what their names are...now they just have to find out what the hell happened. :)
Interested to find out what happens next.
loves.
-princess-

I just read chapters 3 and 4, somehow I missed chapter 3 before. I like where this story is going, though. Very cool. And it's good they've found out what their names are...now they just have to find out what the hell happened. :)
Interested to find out what happens next.
loves.
-princess-
5/25/2007 c4 illuminated bestiary
Well the identity crisis is...sort of solved. Still loving it. I like the image of Max looking at her face and not recognizing herself.
Well the identity crisis is...sort of solved. Still loving it. I like the image of Max looking at her face and not recognizing herself.