for Like Love, Like Lies11/16/2015 c1 
2SugarPopPrincess
Wow. I've never read such an angsty fic with Tsuzuki and Hisoka's relationship. You are so dark and evil. I love it. ;D x
2SugarPopPrincessWow. I've never read such an angsty fic with Tsuzuki and Hisoka's relationship. You are so dark and evil. I love it. ;D x
1/15/2011 c1 Aquamarine Summers
Man, I know how it feels to be depressed and anxious. Hope you're feeling better these days. Although I don't see any canon support for tsuzuki's dark side, these kind of fics are still good to read if you're in a mood. Basically i think if Tsuzuki had a dark side, it would have taken over whenever he reaches the brink of sanity (kyoto, etc..). As for the vampire part, I an see how he would compare himself to one, seeing as they both kill to sustain themselves. Although Tsuzuki doesn't kill humans, he still feels the guilt over it.
But I could see him having a dark side where he turns it on himself. Cause he seems to do that a whole lot in the series (manga and anime). lol
But for a dark tsuzuki fic, even if I don't think they're cannon, it was a fun read.. esp cause I'm in a bad mood myself. Misery loves company (even if it's fictional characters LOL)
Man, I know how it feels to be depressed and anxious. Hope you're feeling better these days. Although I don't see any canon support for tsuzuki's dark side, these kind of fics are still good to read if you're in a mood. Basically i think if Tsuzuki had a dark side, it would have taken over whenever he reaches the brink of sanity (kyoto, etc..). As for the vampire part, I an see how he would compare himself to one, seeing as they both kill to sustain themselves. Although Tsuzuki doesn't kill humans, he still feels the guilt over it.
But I could see him having a dark side where he turns it on himself. Cause he seems to do that a whole lot in the series (manga and anime). lol
But for a dark tsuzuki fic, even if I don't think they're cannon, it was a fun read.. esp cause I'm in a bad mood myself. Misery loves company (even if it's fictional characters LOL)
7/19/2010 c1 animefanatic
You bitch how dare you hurt hiso-chan. I kill you!
You bitch how dare you hurt hiso-chan. I kill you!
6/6/2009 c1 2Arioch the fallen angel
ooh continue continue i really love this story and i´m tired of always hisoka and tsuzuki in romantic way juju this is more interesting
2Arioch the fallen angelooh continue continue i really love this story and i´m tired of always hisoka and tsuzuki in romantic way juju this is more interesting
4/29/2009 c1 Takuya.Toki
This was really well written and deliciously dark! It was very captivating, I wish you had continued it!
This was really well written and deliciously dark! It was very captivating, I wish you had continued it!
11/4/2008 c1 1Morbid-Maggie
The darkness of this piece was delicious! I love the morbid musing and descriptions you used to describe Tsuzuki. Wonderful job! XD
1Morbid-MaggieThe darkness of this piece was delicious! I love the morbid musing and descriptions you used to describe Tsuzuki. Wonderful job! XD
1/31/2008 c1 1Kurenai Tenka
It's probably way out of your mind now, but I thought I'd encourage you to carry on. I like Tsusoka to be fluffy too, but if you take it down this avenue, then going on to..uh..'fix it can only make you feel better right? ^^;
Well either way, an interesting read. =D
1Kurenai TenkaIt's probably way out of your mind now, but I thought I'd encourage you to carry on. I like Tsusoka to be fluffy too, but if you take it down this avenue, then going on to..uh..'fix it can only make you feel better right? ^^;
Well either way, an interesting read. =D
12/14/2007 c1 8Cumcakesxxxx
Aww, don't worry! *patpat* I truely do love the idea of sweet Tsuzuki healing our mentaly unstable Hisoka, but it was a really wonderful change to actually see a Tsuoka dark fic (DOD dark fics are usually MurakixHisoka. =3 And what you did was so interesting! Tsuzuki's dark side, Hisoka not wanting to let go of his love, ect ect! Not to mention your writing was positively lovely! I've really enjoyed all you've written so far! I've noticed you've used "wonton" to describe things, may I ask what it means? Anyway, if I was totally mellow right now (s'like, 2 am), I'd be praising you like crazy! If you can find a way to continue the story, I've DEFINATELY have your back! =3
8CumcakesxxxxAww, don't worry! *patpat* I truely do love the idea of sweet Tsuzuki healing our mentaly unstable Hisoka, but it was a really wonderful change to actually see a Tsuoka dark fic (DOD dark fics are usually MurakixHisoka. =3 And what you did was so interesting! Tsuzuki's dark side, Hisoka not wanting to let go of his love, ect ect! Not to mention your writing was positively lovely! I've really enjoyed all you've written so far! I've noticed you've used "wonton" to describe things, may I ask what it means? Anyway, if I was totally mellow right now (s'like, 2 am), I'd be praising you like crazy! If you can find a way to continue the story, I've DEFINATELY have your back! =3
8/10/2007 c1 NemoChan320
omg! that was so horribly sadistic and sad! poor poor hisoka! but i must comend u for a rly well writen story, and such an unusual plotline for those two, but i must say, that was depressing...but good story none the less ^_^
omg! that was so horribly sadistic and sad! poor poor hisoka! but i must comend u for a rly well writen story, and such an unusual plotline for those two, but i must say, that was depressing...but good story none the less ^_^
6/29/2007 c1 13RedDeath'sMask
O-o I. Loved. IT! omgsh. i loved the style (i personally don't like POVS...but you made it work ^^) i like how you used Tsuzuki as the bad guy instead of the good one. it turns things up a bit. GOOD JOB!
13RedDeath'sMaskO-o I. Loved. IT! omgsh. i loved the style (i personally don't like POVS...but you made it work ^^) i like how you used Tsuzuki as the bad guy instead of the good one. it turns things up a bit. GOOD JOB!
5/14/2007 c1 15WhiteWolfCub
I love these kinds of stories so much! That was a great story, and personally, I think it makes a great one shot. (8D)
15WhiteWolfCubI love these kinds of stories so much! That was a great story, and personally, I think it makes a great one shot. (8D)
4/29/2007 c1 yaoi-hunter
wow! of course you should continue this piece of art! I also wonder what tsuzuki thought about the messy room, wouldn't he suspect anything? I hope you continue with this, please!
wow! of course you should continue this piece of art! I also wonder what tsuzuki thought about the messy room, wouldn't he suspect anything? I hope you continue with this, please!
4/29/2007 c1 silenceinlight
This start was absolutely wonderful! I call it a start because you should, as everyone else has said, definitely continue this. I really like the dynamic that has been set up. It's interesting to see how Hisoka reacted to what Tsuzuki did, and that he stayed with him. If you continued I think it'd be interesting to see how much Hisoka changed to stay with his partner. Also, there aren't enough stories in which Tsuzuki is the 'bad guy' and yet he pulls it off so interestingly because of his oh so sweet behavior. It makes him much more complex than Muraki I feel. You could even throw Muraki in if you continued! Great job though.
To end, as I've told you before, you're an amazing writer and I do hope that you continue this!
This start was absolutely wonderful! I call it a start because you should, as everyone else has said, definitely continue this. I really like the dynamic that has been set up. It's interesting to see how Hisoka reacted to what Tsuzuki did, and that he stayed with him. If you continued I think it'd be interesting to see how much Hisoka changed to stay with his partner. Also, there aren't enough stories in which Tsuzuki is the 'bad guy' and yet he pulls it off so interestingly because of his oh so sweet behavior. It makes him much more complex than Muraki I feel. You could even throw Muraki in if you continued! Great job though.
To end, as I've told you before, you're an amazing writer and I do hope that you continue this!
4/28/2007 c1 3MeghanthePagan
I am a happy Tsuzuki/Hisoka fan also, but I must say you did a really good job with this. It's like you opened a door for me. to a whole new world full of dark, depressing things.
(also, I thought half way through it would turn out to be one of Muraki's wet dreams. ha!)
I kept thinking, Oh I hope Hisoka understands, I hope he can deal with this and still love Tsuzuki. and then you ended it like you did and I was very impressed.
but anyway I really think you should continue this. As I am now an eager pupil in the fine art of dark fics.
3MeghanthePaganI am a happy Tsuzuki/Hisoka fan also, but I must say you did a really good job with this. It's like you opened a door for me. to a whole new world full of dark, depressing things.
(also, I thought half way through it would turn out to be one of Muraki's wet dreams. ha!)
I kept thinking, Oh I hope Hisoka understands, I hope he can deal with this and still love Tsuzuki. and then you ended it like you did and I was very impressed.
but anyway I really think you should continue this. As I am now an eager pupil in the fine art of dark fics.
4/28/2007 c1 XoHikarix
That suceeded in making me not only extremely paranoid of every person I know, but scaring me. I felt so horrible for Hisoka and yeah, I really think this should be continued. You don't see fics like this more often and if Tsuzuki is able to control his other self, then the ending would be so good.
So yeah.
Off with my paranoia.
Great job
That suceeded in making me not only extremely paranoid of every person I know, but scaring me. I felt so horrible for Hisoka and yeah, I really think this should be continued. You don't see fics like this more often and if Tsuzuki is able to control his other self, then the ending would be so good.
So yeah.
Off with my paranoia.
Great job