
5/3/2007 c1 sutkie13
i really really liked it the hole thing was perfect exceps 4 inuyasha not being a virgin i mean wat is dat ya no but still i liked the rest of it laterz.
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i really really liked it the hole thing was perfect exceps 4 inuyasha not being a virgin i mean wat is dat ya no but still i liked the rest of it laterz.
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5/1/2007 c1 addiesmoon
that was one of the best one shot i have read i love it
that was one of the best one shot i have read i love it
5/1/2007 c1 addiesmoon
that was one of the best one shot i have read i love it
that was one of the best one shot i have read i love it
5/1/2007 c1
8darklady26
Aw. It was really sweet. Inuyasha and Kagome gotta love them. This story was brilliant. I loved it. It actually brought me to tears. I loved every minute of it. Please write thousands more like this.
Catch ya later.
Darklady26 you have an amazing gift.

Aw. It was really sweet. Inuyasha and Kagome gotta love them. This story was brilliant. I loved it. It actually brought me to tears. I loved every minute of it. Please write thousands more like this.
Catch ya later.
Darklady26 you have an amazing gift.
5/1/2007 c1
1Sunphire
What is there to fix? You know when it is a good story when you don't see ANY mistakes and all you are doing is reading. This was very well writen. I loved Kagomes new look and I loved the songs you put in. They were perfect. There is nothing wrong with this story. It doesn't need a sequel, it's just awsome. Hope to read more. ^.^

What is there to fix? You know when it is a good story when you don't see ANY mistakes and all you are doing is reading. This was very well writen. I loved Kagomes new look and I loved the songs you put in. They were perfect. There is nothing wrong with this story. It doesn't need a sequel, it's just awsome. Hope to read more. ^.^
4/30/2007 c1
1Purpleem89
wow an amazing story one of the best i've ever read and those are a lot
concratulations or however u spell that.
I think you deserve a clap or something
PS made me so horny :P:P

wow an amazing story one of the best i've ever read and those are a lot
concratulations or however u spell that.
I think you deserve a clap or something
PS made me so horny :P:P
4/29/2007 c1 hinata51
that was awsome and long thats good my friends always make very short stories haha looking forward to other stories
that was awsome and long thats good my friends always make very short stories haha looking forward to other stories
4/29/2007 c1
4devilstarkitty13
OMG! this was so good! I wish my lemon was this good! lol wow...VERY nice job! Keep up the great work!

OMG! this was so good! I wish my lemon was this good! lol wow...VERY nice job! Keep up the great work!
4/28/2007 c1
3Island Heart
Good story ! I loved the songs and I loved the way Inuyasha realized his mistake and how he fixed it. I’ve always wanted him to forget about Kikyo and find happiness with Kagome. I know that Inuyasha feels guilty about Kikyo and he wants to protect her from Naraku bu how can he close his heart to someone like Kagome who gave him an unconditional love, who accepts him as a hanyou. She doesn’t want him to change. She accepts him like he is.
If only he was as open as he is in the mangas and the anime about his feelings for Kagome.
I understand Kagome’s doubts when Inuyasha asked her to be her mate. After all the times he betrayed her, all the times he ran to see Kikyo, how can she trust him? How can she be sure that he’ll stay with her forever? But I guess that everyone needs a second chance. Even Inuyasha.

Good story ! I loved the songs and I loved the way Inuyasha realized his mistake and how he fixed it. I’ve always wanted him to forget about Kikyo and find happiness with Kagome. I know that Inuyasha feels guilty about Kikyo and he wants to protect her from Naraku bu how can he close his heart to someone like Kagome who gave him an unconditional love, who accepts him as a hanyou. She doesn’t want him to change. She accepts him like he is.
If only he was as open as he is in the mangas and the anime about his feelings for Kagome.
I understand Kagome’s doubts when Inuyasha asked her to be her mate. After all the times he betrayed her, all the times he ran to see Kikyo, how can she trust him? How can she be sure that he’ll stay with her forever? But I guess that everyone needs a second chance. Even Inuyasha.
4/28/2007 c1 Liz
I loved it. I thought it was a great idea. Finally Kagome stood up for herself! Good Job!
I loved it. I thought it was a great idea. Finally Kagome stood up for herself! Good Job!