for The Greater Gift12/31/2013 c5 
4Ghost Angel14
Dude it's ok about the wedding dress we understand. Were no supposed to know how to properly describe what women wear. Anyway good fanfic very nice. And you might get more reviews if the chapters were a tad longer. I know you can right more by thr way you wrote this I can tell you have some writing skill
4Ghost Angel14Dude it's ok about the wedding dress we understand. Were no supposed to know how to properly describe what women wear. Anyway good fanfic very nice. And you might get more reviews if the chapters were a tad longer. I know you can right more by thr way you wrote this I can tell you have some writing skill
11/11/2013 c5 Guest
Good ending. And lets lynch all hinatas pursuers she belongs to naruto only believe it. Same for naruto he belongs to hinata. Naruto x hinata for eternity.
Good ending. And lets lynch all hinatas pursuers she belongs to naruto only believe it. Same for naruto he belongs to hinata. Naruto x hinata for eternity.
8/2/2011 c5 ChibiNaruto3390
All I have to say is...you are an incredibly(?) talented writer, that scum got better than he deserved(?), and yes NaruHina is the best ever!
All I have to say is...you are an incredibly(?) talented writer, that scum got better than he deserved(?), and yes NaruHina is the best ever!
5/24/2010 c5 T
OMG!
THE BEST PAIRING! + STORY!
NARUHINA 4EVERz!
Anyway, Akira so totally deserved more than all the Barney sessions...
Why not add the TELETUBBIES and sextruple them both and beyond?
It's a great idea...
OMG!
THE BEST PAIRING! + STORY!
NARUHINA 4EVERz!
Anyway, Akira so totally deserved more than all the Barney sessions...
Why not add the TELETUBBIES and sextruple them both and beyond?
It's a great idea...
2/16/2010 c5 23Apex Soldier
Awesome!
Nice wedding... it was great actually...
Good luck with whatever!
23Apex SoldierAwesome!
Nice wedding... it was great actually...
Good luck with whatever!
2/9/2010 c5 3Chewie Cookies
Yay for weddings! Yay for fluff! Yay for tormenting NaruHina haters!
Keep up the good work, my friend!
3Chewie CookiesYay for weddings! Yay for fluff! Yay for tormenting NaruHina haters!
Keep up the good work, my friend!
7/21/2008 c5 20Kenchi Narukami
Awsome man!Funny' espicialy with the Barney piece, that was classic and priceless. Please do a sequel!
p.s the only part I did not like was the part where you had that bastard Akira call Hinata a bitch. never do that again or I will hunt you down and perfom the Leaf village secret jutsu 1,0 years of death, the 64 palms, and the chidori which I memorized and turned into some real painful teqniques!
20Kenchi NarukamiAwsome man!Funny' espicialy with the Barney piece, that was classic and priceless. Please do a sequel!
p.s the only part I did not like was the part where you had that bastard Akira call Hinata a bitch. never do that again or I will hunt you down and perfom the Leaf village secret jutsu 1,0 years of death, the 64 palms, and the chidori which I memorized and turned into some real painful teqniques!
8/17/2007 c1 tobiobito
ohh pls make a wedding chapter that would be so cute :D
ohh pls make a wedding chapter that would be so cute :D
6/20/2007 c1 katie
IT WAS GREAT! i really liked it :)
IT WAS GREAT! i really liked it :)
6/16/2007 c5 31Your Pet Peeve
XD I LOVE MASTER GUY. End of story. Well...not LOVE but you know what I mean...6 minutes! XD ha!
31Your Pet PeeveXD I LOVE MASTER GUY. End of story. Well...not LOVE but you know what I mean...6 minutes! XD ha!