for These Days5/21/2007 c14 BrOoKe DaViS23
Hey i just lovedthis chapter so much it was soo cute i love brucas soo much. This story is amazing well done i love it.
Please update soon i cant wait to see what happens.
Hey i just lovedthis chapter so much it was soo cute i love brucas soo much. This story is amazing well done i love it.
Please update soon i cant wait to see what happens.
5/21/2007 c14 
1iluvmedou
YEY! Hes her Broody & shes his Cheery again! Great chapter! And a great original idea with Bevin & Dim! Haahahaha it had me in fits of giggles heheeheehee :p LOved it! Cant wait for the next chapter :) Natalie xx
1iluvmedouYEY! Hes her Broody & shes his Cheery again! Great chapter! And a great original idea with Bevin & Dim! Haahahaha it had me in fits of giggles heheeheehee :p LOved it! Cant wait for the next chapter :) Natalie xx
5/21/2007 c14 22Linkie
Oh, I so loved this chapter! Brucas were so cute and my gawd! Bevin and Tim! that was unexpected...but very funny! I still can't get around the idea the two are married and all! I loved the scene with BL saying goodbye to Karen...
It's funny, I was thinking of something rather interesting about it: You know how they say men marry women that look like their mothers? Well, I always thought Brooke and Karen were alike on many levels... both cheerleaders, brunettes, I think Karen was a lot like Brooke when she was younger, and they both fell in love with a Scott that hurt them, more than once... Well, I don't know why I thought about this...maybe because I'm now thinking about season 5...and want my Brucas back!
Anyway, back on the story, I'm happy they decided to go back to Brooke's together, and that they got to talk about their "situation".
I can't wait for more! Please UD soon!
22LinkieOh, I so loved this chapter! Brucas were so cute and my gawd! Bevin and Tim! that was unexpected...but very funny! I still can't get around the idea the two are married and all! I loved the scene with BL saying goodbye to Karen...
It's funny, I was thinking of something rather interesting about it: You know how they say men marry women that look like their mothers? Well, I always thought Brooke and Karen were alike on many levels... both cheerleaders, brunettes, I think Karen was a lot like Brooke when she was younger, and they both fell in love with a Scott that hurt them, more than once... Well, I don't know why I thought about this...maybe because I'm now thinking about season 5...and want my Brucas back!
Anyway, back on the story, I'm happy they decided to go back to Brooke's together, and that they got to talk about their "situation".
I can't wait for more! Please UD soon!
5/20/2007 c14 BrucasForeva
aw thts so cute..loved the flashback..and tim and bevin were awesomee i always wanted them to hook up..i miss tim in the show..ud soon
aw thts so cute..loved the flashback..and tim and bevin were awesomee i always wanted them to hook up..i miss tim in the show..ud soon
5/20/2007 c14 3flipflopgal
Yay! This is an awesome chapter, I hope Lucas stays in LA with Brooke! Update soon!
3flipflopgalYay! This is an awesome chapter, I hope Lucas stays in LA with Brooke! Update soon!
5/20/2007 c14 1tinycapricorn12
Score! It's official. They're going out. I can't wait till it happens in the show. I have a bad feeling it ain't gonna happen this season though. *tear* I loved it. Can't wait till you update. Oh and I wonder if Jeyton knows since he kinda gave it away. What a dork. hehe
1tinycapricorn12Score! It's official. They're going out. I can't wait till it happens in the show. I have a bad feeling it ain't gonna happen this season though. *tear* I loved it. Can't wait till you update. Oh and I wonder if Jeyton knows since he kinda gave it away. What a dork. hehe
5/20/2007 c14 vannessa
love it glad tehy are together
still hope they ahve the spontanious ness and kinkiness like in other chapters
love it glad tehy are together
still hope they ahve the spontanious ness and kinkiness like in other chapters
5/20/2007 c14 4Matt91
Awesome, awesome chapter. I loved it! So glad to see Brooke and Lucas are back together-going slowly of course. I love them together, they're amazing. That's one thing I don't like about the show now, the Leyton storyline. And also, I forgot to mention about how realistic your story. This not only seems like something that could happen in real life, but on the show as well. Excellent job, can't wait for the next one!
4Matt91Awesome, awesome chapter. I loved it! So glad to see Brooke and Lucas are back together-going slowly of course. I love them together, they're amazing. That's one thing I don't like about the show now, the Leyton storyline. And also, I forgot to mention about how realistic your story. This not only seems like something that could happen in real life, but on the show as well. Excellent job, can't wait for the next one!
5/20/2007 c13 BrOoKe DaViS23
I loved this chapter it was soo cute.
Brucas rock forever
update soon i cant wait
I loved this chapter it was soo cute.
Brucas rock forever
update soon i cant wait
5/19/2007 c13 4Matt91
I have been sitting in front of my computer, glued to my screen, for the past 45 minutes reading your ABOLUTELY EXTRAORDINARY story! I am so in love with it! If it wasn't an inanimate object, I would marry it because that's how much I love it! lol I write One Tree Hill stories myself (in fact I'm working on one right now entitled, "Rebuilding and Crumbling") but I have to say that this is by far not only the best One Tree Hill story I've ever read, but it's also the best story I've ever, period. Firstly, I love the plot (I think this is the type of plot that should be used if OTH comes back for a 5th season.) I think it's very imaganitive and creative. Secondly, I love the pairings in this story-Naley, Brucas, and Jeyton all the way! Thirdly, I love how you stay true to the characters and the way they would act and talk. Fourthly, I love how you've developed everyone's lives so well. Fifthly, I love how well you describe everything. It actually makes me feel like I am watching an actual episode of OTH. Lastly, you writing style is so excellent. Everything is clear and able to be understood and you are able captivate the audience (I know I was captivated.) I have loved the first 13 chapters of this story and I absolutely cannot wait for the next one!
~Matt (Matt91)
4Matt91I have been sitting in front of my computer, glued to my screen, for the past 45 minutes reading your ABOLUTELY EXTRAORDINARY story! I am so in love with it! If it wasn't an inanimate object, I would marry it because that's how much I love it! lol I write One Tree Hill stories myself (in fact I'm working on one right now entitled, "Rebuilding and Crumbling") but I have to say that this is by far not only the best One Tree Hill story I've ever read, but it's also the best story I've ever, period. Firstly, I love the plot (I think this is the type of plot that should be used if OTH comes back for a 5th season.) I think it's very imaganitive and creative. Secondly, I love the pairings in this story-Naley, Brucas, and Jeyton all the way! Thirdly, I love how you stay true to the characters and the way they would act and talk. Fourthly, I love how you've developed everyone's lives so well. Fifthly, I love how well you describe everything. It actually makes me feel like I am watching an actual episode of OTH. Lastly, you writing style is so excellent. Everything is clear and able to be understood and you are able captivate the audience (I know I was captivated.) I have loved the first 13 chapters of this story and I absolutely cannot wait for the next one!
~Matt (Matt91)