5/5/2007 c6 3S05Y31
Great chapter! Thanks for the shoutout! I loved the Breyton in this chap, it was so real and honest lol this story is great! UD ASAP!
Great chapter! Thanks for the shoutout! I loved the Breyton in this chap, it was so real and honest lol this story is great! UD ASAP!
5/5/2007 c5 hcf
update soon
update soon
5/5/2007 c5 22Linkie
OMG! I loved it so much, it was amazing! I'm actually at a loss for words and clearly don't know where to start! lol Oh well, I only have one thing in mind: the brucas was totally awesome, from the beginning, with the kids (that was funny) to their kiss...and damn what a kiss! I can't to see what happens next! Seriously, that was an amazing chapter and you better ud soon girl!
OMG! I loved it so much, it was amazing! I'm actually at a loss for words and clearly don't know where to start! lol Oh well, I only have one thing in mind: the brucas was totally awesome, from the beginning, with the kids (that was funny) to their kiss...and damn what a kiss! I can't to see what happens next! Seriously, that was an amazing chapter and you better ud soon girl!
5/5/2007 c5 1brucas831
yes i definitly loved the brucas in this it was so cute ice cream and beer never had it together maybe i should lol...
i dont want to get into much detail but if i had a soaking wet lucas in fornt of me i dont think i could have controlled myself lol
update soon love the story
yes i definitly loved the brucas in this it was so cute ice cream and beer never had it together maybe i should lol...
i dont want to get into much detail but if i had a soaking wet lucas in fornt of me i dont think i could have controlled myself lol
update soon love the story
5/4/2007 c5 sweetxsammy
wow...the kids are adorable, lucas & brooke's relationship with the kids is adorable, and let's face it...so are brooke & lucas together! this might go down as one of my favorite chapters of any story...ever! i just thought it was so cute and perfect...but most importantly not cheesy (although it can be good sometimes haha!)! i've found myself getting more excited with each chapter...so keep 'em comin'! it looks like you're getting a lot of readers on this story...congrats!
wow...the kids are adorable, lucas & brooke's relationship with the kids is adorable, and let's face it...so are brooke & lucas together! this might go down as one of my favorite chapters of any story...ever! i just thought it was so cute and perfect...but most importantly not cheesy (although it can be good sometimes haha!)! i've found myself getting more excited with each chapter...so keep 'em comin'! it looks like you're getting a lot of readers on this story...congrats!
5/4/2007 c5 cheerrrgurl71
i love this story! please update soon! i loved the brucas action in this chapter! i would like to see lucas actually trying to win her back and fight for her! lol. like have him apologize cause we ahven't really seen that and explain why he didn't run after her that night that they broke up. cause the not fighting for her thing is almost as bad as the whole cheating on her thing. just some suggestions! and i love the kids and the whole barbie doll thing! lol! that was hilarious!my cousin used to do that to my barbies so i can connect with jenny. lol. please update soon!
i love this story! please update soon! i loved the brucas action in this chapter! i would like to see lucas actually trying to win her back and fight for her! lol. like have him apologize cause we ahven't really seen that and explain why he didn't run after her that night that they broke up. cause the not fighting for her thing is almost as bad as the whole cheating on her thing. just some suggestions! and i love the kids and the whole barbie doll thing! lol! that was hilarious!my cousin used to do that to my barbies so i can connect with jenny. lol. please update soon!
5/4/2007 c5 Tara
You are such an incredible writer and the fact that you update so fast makes you my favorite writer ever! This chapter was really good and I loved the Brucas interaction at the end!
You are such an incredible writer and the fact that you update so fast makes you my favorite writer ever! This chapter was really good and I loved the Brucas interaction at the end!
5/4/2007 c5 Grooviejj-othfan88
great story.. just started reading it.. cant wait for your next update..
great story.. just started reading it.. cant wait for your next update..
5/4/2007 c5 5apple01
OMG! Awesome chapter! Little kids are quite the mess...i would know seeing that i babysit lol. Im soo glad Lucas and Brooke kissed...they needed to. Update soon! :)
OMG! Awesome chapter! Little kids are quite the mess...i would know seeing that i babysit lol. Im soo glad Lucas and Brooke kissed...they needed to. Update soon! :)
5/4/2007 c5 3S05Y31
Yey for Brucas! This chapter made me laugh lol! Great chap! loved the Brucas! UD SOON
Yey for Brucas! This chapter made me laugh lol! Great chap! loved the Brucas! UD SOON
5/4/2007 c5 Anne Jaocbs
please... you have to post the next chapter, this was so good..
please... you have to post the next chapter, this was so good..
5/4/2007 c5 3flipflopgal
I just read all of your story so far! It's really great, and I can't wait to read more, I really like Brucas!
I just read all of your story so far! It's really great, and I can't wait to read more, I really like Brucas!
5/4/2007 c5 missusgrey
hell yeah i love this chapter.5am still awake.no sleep.'these days' update..WORTH IT!.guess the kiss pretty much started brucas fire ^_^ love it soo much.everybody is soo busy with their partners..love it.cant wait for brucas babies =P keep it up..cant wait ^_^
hell yeah i love this chapter.5am still awake.no sleep.'these days' update..WORTH IT!.guess the kiss pretty much started brucas fire ^_^ love it soo much.everybody is soo busy with their partners..love it.cant wait for brucas babies =P keep it up..cant wait ^_^