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10/20/2012 c1 kairi
Love it
10/16/2008 c1 CaptainKa
I love it! It's really deep and it really does fit jay!
7/10/2007 c1 3Chaotic Blades
Wow, that was... deep. You're right, it did really suit Jay. Not only the words but the fact that the lines are phrased as questions. You're good at poetry. Definately a tradgety (sp?). It does show Jay's other side at the same time as the side he shows most of the world and that is definately a great acheivement.
5/28/2007 c1 321457
Yay, I like your poem too! ^.^ Yay for depressing poems. And I agree; emotion is what makes a poem good. Gotta have lots, or else it's just a bunch of words thrown together.
5/4/2007 c1 Dr. Casey
That poem corresponds to Jay very well. That's some good work, Cheea, and I don't usually care for poetry.
4/30/2007 c1 13saralynn92
Way to go on you're first story (i think.)

It doesn't rhyme, but those are in my opinion, some of the best.

And easiest!

LoVeDiT!^-^

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