for The Final Mission3/14/2010 c21 
76phoenixmagic1
I liked the concern Winters had for Lewis and the other children. I hope they can get the portal fixed! I'm really enjoying this story!
76phoenixmagic1I liked the concern Winters had for Lewis and the other children. I hope they can get the portal fixed! I'm really enjoying this story!
3/14/2010 c16 phoenixmagic1
I have immensely enjoyed reading this story. I liked how you explained everything in such a way that it made it easy to understand. I appreciated that. I think my favorite part so far was when Winters walked in on Sarah naked...it was too funny! Please continue!
I have immensely enjoyed reading this story. I liked how you explained everything in such a way that it made it easy to understand. I appreciated that. I think my favorite part so far was when Winters walked in on Sarah naked...it was too funny! Please continue!
2/22/2010 c2 phoenixmagic1
I really like where this is going! I love the humor and friendship between the men...great job :)
I really like where this is going! I love the humor and friendship between the men...great job :)
2/20/2010 c7 4eurogirl14
interesting story so far, and im so happy you decided to return the people you did! and, from the parts of the real timeframe of band of brothers thats in parentheses, im guessing that the real people are in the cave, and duplicates are in the 'real' world. awesome!
4eurogirl14interesting story so far, and im so happy you decided to return the people you did! and, from the parts of the real timeframe of band of brothers thats in parentheses, im guessing that the real people are in the cave, and duplicates are in the 'real' world. awesome!
12/2/2009 c60 FooFighter0234
Kid, there is such a thing "doing one's research", and there is "taking things too far". I too am a writer who enjoys writing and reading pieces related to BoB, and I take great pains to keep what I write in canon with the portrayals of the men as the actors portrayed them in the miniseries (such as Gene being Catholic, Liebgott being Jewish, etc). You took this too far. As much as I love BoB, I find that using the name of a man who wasn't even associated with Easy violates not only his memory and his family's memory of him, but Easy as well. I am glad you decided to edit the offending chapter accordingly.
Kid, there is such a thing "doing one's research", and there is "taking things too far". I too am a writer who enjoys writing and reading pieces related to BoB, and I take great pains to keep what I write in canon with the portrayals of the men as the actors portrayed them in the miniseries (such as Gene being Catholic, Liebgott being Jewish, etc). You took this too far. As much as I love BoB, I find that using the name of a man who wasn't even associated with Easy violates not only his memory and his family's memory of him, but Easy as well. I am glad you decided to edit the offending chapter accordingly.
8/25/2009 c63 7fiona1987
Wow, 63 chapters later and we've come to the end of the story. It's been quite a trek, but I loved reading every, single chapter. What I find amazing with this story is that you so effortlessly managed to transport us with the same characters we know and love but to a completely different little world. Basically, what I'm trying to say is that you've done an excellent job.
I know you're busy with your novel but if you get the chance I hope you'll do more fanfiction. I know I've said it before but I still maintain that you're one of the best writers we've got on the BoB section :D.
7fiona1987Wow, 63 chapters later and we've come to the end of the story. It's been quite a trek, but I loved reading every, single chapter. What I find amazing with this story is that you so effortlessly managed to transport us with the same characters we know and love but to a completely different little world. Basically, what I'm trying to say is that you've done an excellent job.
I know you're busy with your novel but if you get the chance I hope you'll do more fanfiction. I know I've said it before but I still maintain that you're one of the best writers we've got on the BoB section :D.
4/8/2009 c62 Bobadoo
Oh, I don't want it to end! The chapters are amazing as usual. I'm really going to miss this story. Thanks for continuing to write it!
Oh, I don't want it to end! The chapters are amazing as usual. I'm really going to miss this story. Thanks for continuing to write it!
4/6/2009 c1 8HannahVintage
Yay!I love this Guarnere hilarty that i have missed so much! It realy shows there character and when i was reading this i couldn't help but laugh at some parts.Great!
8HannahVintageYay!I love this Guarnere hilarty that i have missed so much! It realy shows there character and when i was reading this i couldn't help but laugh at some parts.Great!
1/29/2009 c5 5iHedge
Hooray for strange C-rations! I assume they tie into the story in some way...?
I'm done for tonight, but I'll be reading throughout the week. Very good and unusual take!
5iHedgeHooray for strange C-rations! I assume they tie into the story in some way...?
I'm done for tonight, but I'll be reading throughout the week. Very good and unusual take!
1/29/2009 c4 iHedge
Was that little tidbit about Forrest Guth at the end part of the story or just some random trivia?
Ahem. As I've said before and probably'll keep on saying, your story is doing a good job of holding my attention.
Was that little tidbit about Forrest Guth at the end part of the story or just some random trivia?
Ahem. As I've said before and probably'll keep on saying, your story is doing a good job of holding my attention.
1/29/2009 c2 iHedge
Very interesting! But, as some have already mentioned and I hope you won't take it the wrong way, but it's a little hard to read through at times because of punctuation..
Other than that, I'm really enjoying this!
Very interesting! But, as some have already mentioned and I hope you won't take it the wrong way, but it's a little hard to read through at times because of punctuation..
Other than that, I'm really enjoying this!
1/29/2009 c1 iHedge
Whoa!
Ok. So I've been bypassing this story for months...and now I'm hooked, from the first chapter!
I actually started reading through the reviews first but then decided that was too much work and why not read the actual story and here I am, and I am excited. :)
Whoa!
Ok. So I've been bypassing this story for months...and now I'm hooked, from the first chapter!
I actually started reading through the reviews first but then decided that was too much work and why not read the actual story and here I am, and I am excited. :)